"Acquaint Me With Your Fuck-Ups", Torchwood, Ianto&Suzie

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Title: Acquaint Me With Your Fuck-Ups
Fandom: Torchwood
Characters: Ianto, Suzie & everyone else [Jack/Suzie, Owen/Suzie, Ianto/Lisa, slight Jack/Ianto]
Challenge/Prompt: fanfic100 081. How? & 7rainbowprompts #7. Sneaky
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 6320
Genre: Gen
Summary: You’d have to be bloody mad to want to work here. Are you?
Author’s Notes: This idea clung onto

Comments

[woman_of_]

That was totally Brill! I loved it to bits!

[frakkin_addict]

That was a really great story. I liked Suzie conspiring behind Jack's back to get Ianto hired, but her cold-bloodedness gave me chills.

[thaddeusfavour]

Wonderful fic. I loved the way you expressed Ianto's panic, despair and distress as he worried about Lisa. You gave her a real existence in his life as more than just a plot point, something not many authors have managed to do.

And Suzie's characterization is absolutely fantastic. That she was playing a game with Ianto and trying to manipulate Jack, and wondering about how easy it had become for her to lie to him - excellent. Owen and Tosh as well. I really like the dysfunctional, on-the-edge characters you've written here. Though, since most of what we saw about the others was from Suzies POV, one has to wonder how true the vision is. Great fic!

[mellyna]

Wonderful story. Thanks for sharing.

[rm]

Utterly masterful and I really, really felt for Suzie.