Team Jon: Hell Hath No Wrath like a Woman Scorned

Sep 04, 2008 13:52

Title: : Not Like Jason (Despite the Medea)
Team: Team Jon
Prompt: Hell Hath No Fury Like A Woman Scorned
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: None
Pairing: Brendon/Ryan
Summary: For his Classics course, Ryan Ross is given the assignment to relate the ancient myth Medea to everyday life by interviewing one of his fellow classmates, dumped by her boyfriend for ( Read more... )

rating:pg13, prompt:hell hath no fury like a woman sc, round i, length:medium, pairing:ryan/brendon, team:jon

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fullcollapse September 4 2008, 13:39:15 UTC
I really, really liked this! It grabbed my attention and kept it until the end. Very well done. I totally didn't see that email bit coming--I thought Ryan was doomed. ha ( ... )

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melish September 4 2008, 15:12:31 UTC
Ryan was still in a rage, but when he calmed down a little, and looked around the parking lot, he grimaced. “Do you think maybe you could drive me back to campus?” Ahahahaha. I loved this. It was funny and emotional and the plot was so original. (The only thing I didn't really appreciate was putting the recent political news into the fic. I had the cheesiest smile on my face when I finished reading this. I loved that Lindsey sorted herself out and got over Brendon, and this story had me riveted from the first paragraph. There were some weird random numbers and symbols but I'm sure that wasn't your fault. Overall, I really enjoyed this!

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spazzyskittles September 4 2008, 18:39:57 UTC
This was such a great story! I loved Ryan's character and the way he contrasted with Brendon's. I kind of have a soft spot for stories where Ryan's kind of a jerk, or at least a tad snarky, but Brendon has the ability to sneak in there and make Ryan smile.

You did enough to make Brendon slightly quirky but not crack-ish, which is just wonderful. It's a difficult balance to achieve, and I think you did it well.

“Sucks to be you,” Spencer chimed in, “unless I’m mistaken, gay guys and other men kind of go together.”

I laughed so hard at that. And I adored the ice cream exchange, that was really cute.

Anyway, I loved it, just my type of fic.

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silver_etoile September 4 2008, 21:59:30 UTC
Man, you already know how much I love this fic (because I've only told you like 20 times) but I will say it again! Brendon is so freaking adorable and anything with Greek Mythology has got my vote for the win! God, I just love that you included it. And Ryan is so idiotic that it just fits him perfectly. Spencer is awesome too even if he is straight, but I do like Haley so I don't really have a problem with it ;]

Um, I don't know how much I can ramble about this except to say that I loved it and you already know that so... YAY! It reminded me so much of the Greek Mythology class I took sophomore year and all the myths. I'm actually in a Classics course right now, but it's Ancient Roman history, not greek :[

P.S. i know you don't hav control over this, but you might want to inform the mod of the "technical glitches" in the text and see if they can be fixed. There are some weird things going on there... like numbers in the text. Just don't want anyone to mistake it for grammar errors.

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justsomehippie September 7 2008, 03:17:55 UTC
that was really, really cute. x]

it had a really nice plot and i really enjoyed brendon and ryan's romance, but (yes, there's always a 'but' with me) i thought it could have been a little better. i just find it unlikely that lindsey would go from the extreme of omg-i-hate-brendon-so-much-watch-me-bash-his-car-in to awesome-i'm-so-helpful-ex-girlfriend, but... i'm picky like that. *shrug*

on the upside, though, the writing was fantastic, and if you had gotten the plot just a tiny bit more involved and gone deeper into a few things, this would be totally rate a 9 from me. :]

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