I'll Just Admit This To You Now...
work title: what to do with wings
author: pandastacia/panda/sonya
chapter title: taking chances
dedication: For Riz, mostly.
Because she doesn't want to feel like a pedophile because she likes an eleven year old. ;)
& this is also to Sara & Les for being there when I was panicking, either about writing a total of 5000 words or what someone smells like.
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author: pandastacia/panda/sonya
chapter title: taking chances
dedication: For Riz, mostly.
Because she doesn't want to feel like a pedophile because she likes an eleven year old. ;)
& this is also to Sara & Les for being there when I was panicking, either about writing a total of 5000 words or what someone smells like.
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The RushxSimone was so adorable. These are the scenes where they realise its mutual? LOVE HAS BLOSSOMED. GAAAA. Each scene you write just makes me hunger for more!!!
Was the tense supposed to change at the end? It made it seem more immediate but I don't know if it was supposed to become present. And heh, you mentioned the sewing and the dress bothering her twice :') But apart from that and a few typos that are obviously due to the rush of writing something SO AMAZING!!!
I'm going to do a fanfiction-stalker comment now ;) "OMGZZZZ PLZ LYK UPDATE SOON FERSERIOUS BEEBZ COS I LYK TTLY LUV DIS 2K9!!"
Looovvveeee :)
And also, CONGRATULATIONS on getting into yet another College you applied to :) I hope you get into Brown/ Stanford too. Just to smush it in those pompous girls' faces! :)
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He's, like, older than me too! =D
Simone is SUCH a lucky betch. I kept realizing that while I was writing... >.>
I would draw Pandora, but I fail at any kind of art.
I still with music & writing.
It leans more towards love. Obviously this was a BIG jump from the last chapter, so the next one takes place 4-6 years earlier. So you'll kinda be back to pedophile-status...
I am going to make a time line. At some point. >.>
Ummm, I'll have to check?
By the end, I was really tired (hi, 3 in the morning!
But I felt like I NEEDED to get this scene out).
So yes, I will look back for typos & random tense changes. <.<
THANK YOU FOR REMINDING ME OF THAT!!! =D
Hahaha, I'll get out another scene as fast as I can while keeping up with my insane activities.
I think I want 4 more scenes- magic number of 7.
& that's a nice amount of memories...
THANK YOU!
|GLOMP|
ILY!
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OMFG.
OMFG.
OMFG.
THEY KISSED.
THEY FUCKING KISSED, SONYA! *flails*
OMFG.
I love this. This has GOT to be my favorite installment! I swear and I LOVE Pandora's hair andandand Wesley sounds just as awesome as his (amazingamazing) brother and GAH!
*flails*
"with the effect of his name for him" -- I think you mean "her", amirite? *giggles*
SONYA, THEY KISSED. *flails*
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Ummm, don't fall over...?
Hah, I can't write kisses. So fail on my part...
Heh, I really like Pandora's hair too. ^_^
It took me forever to decide Wes's personality... What a tricky little bugger.
Thanks for catching that. :)
I made a lot of typos.
Wayyyy too tired. T_T
|flails with Les|
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SONYA THIS IS SO CUTE. But, uh, it kind of makes me sad. Because since we kinda know how this ends and all, even through all the fluff you can clearly see the doom hanging there, threatening to break them to bits.
AND HAH, WES, THEY WERE IN THE PANTRY, NOT THE BROOM CLOSET!!! XD
and, uh, I'd continue to rant about the cuteness and Pandora's blue hair (WHICH IS COOL BY THE WAY!!!) but I'm kind of having a video game induced sob-fest.
asdfjkl;
BUT I LOVE IT AND I LOVE YOU AND I LOVE CHOCOLATE CHIP COOKIES.
Which I apparently have. OHMAIGAWD, YAY!
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& yeah, the fact that you know what's going to happen makes it ridiculously upsetting.
But it must be like that, you know?
They're too perfect.
Wes is very astute. Cute little bugger who is also rather... unfortunate.
I don't do many video games.
I blame FF... & school.
CHOCOLATE CHIP COOKIE FTW.
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