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palavrae

Circadia

Jan 12, 2008 22:45

Title: Circadia, Part I
Rating: R
Characters: Bobby, Dean, Sam, and Ruby
Word Count: 3,230
Warnings: language, brother angst
Summary: It’s almost like Sam’s dead all over again. Only this time there isn’t a deal that can undo what he’s done.
Disclaimer: Not mine, the boys, I mean. The words are mine; I take full responsibility for mangling what’s left of ( Read more... )

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calijirl5150 January 13 2008, 07:47:39 UTC

WOW - this is just awesome, pretty prowerful. Your Dean angst & Bobby's voice are excellent.

palavrae January 13 2008, 17:47:34 UTC

Thanks so much! I have a weakness for Dean angst (poor boy) and Bobby has a special place in my heart, so your comments are especially heartening. :)

ruby_jelly January 13 2008, 11:00:56 UTC

This is devastating, and exciting, and a new concept to me!! Woohoo! That's always exciting, eh! It was really tense, and the way clues were just dropped in filling out the picture was cleverly executed. Please don't be too long with the next installment. ;-)

palavrae January 13 2008, 17:55:07 UTC

Oh, yay for "devestating" because that's what I always shoot for. ;) Hehe.

the way clues were just dropped in filling out the picture was cleverly executed

Thank you. It's always been a challenge for me not to smack down a couple of huge paragraphs of expository babble at the beginning of a story under the guise of situation set up. I tried to do it differently this time and it's awesome that you noticed. *dances* :)

Thanks for reading and leaving such a nice comment!

curtainpull January 13 2008, 11:58:41 UTC

Eeeeee. Gotta love Bobby!

palavrae January 13 2008, 17:55:49 UTC

*loves Bobby to a million pieces*

Thanks for reading! :)

shadow_of_doubt January 13 2008, 14:48:18 UTC

Ooh, can't wait for more!

palavrae January 13 2008, 17:58:22 UTC

Hi! *waves*

Thanks for coming over and reading! :)

Missouri's POV is up next. She's so much fun to write. The Show needs to bring her back.

hugemind January 13 2008, 19:18:24 UTC

Yay, you posted it! And there's more coming! :D

What is it with these Winchesters thinking they got to do everything alone?

So, Bobby's noticed it, too... And your Bobby sounded awesome - calm even faced with Dean's desperation, trying to reason with him.

And the clocks stopping at 8:13? Like in the Pilot? *pokes the clocks*

palavrae January 14 2008, 19:31:30 UTC

Oo. *stares at your shiny new icon*

I see that you're wasting no time maxing out your 100+ icon limit. You'll never go back to a basic account. ;)

Bobby sounded awesome - calm even faced with Dean's desperation, trying to reason with him.

Thanks! I love Bobby. It was interesting to write from his POV. As much as I loved John, I think Bobby is a healthier role model/father figure for the boys. He cares, he's involved, he's got a background in demonology, the boys trust him AND listen to him, but he's not so entrenched in the dynsfunction that he's incapable of evaluating the situation somewhat objectively. That's not to say Bobby likely doesn't have his own little world of denial and dysfunction ... anyone who chooses to be a hunter must be slightly damaged and have suffered some loss at some point. Also, Bobby has the pig hat. :)

And the clocks stopping at 8:13? Like in the Pilot?*grins* Even though Kripke said in one the S2 DVD commentary that the ~8:15'ish YED/demon attacks (pilot, "Salvation", "AHBL-1") were coincidental ( ... )