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Jan 27, 2007 00:47

LOST - Part 18

Title: Lost, Part 18 ( Read more... )

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keenoled January 27 2007, 11:15:25 UTC
Update! I'm so happy you're still writing this! Hope everything clears out about your life, but I'll be waiting patiently for the next chapter even if it takes a while. Um, mostly patiently. I'm really really sucked into this story, I love your language and your take on the characters, and I adore your OC's, and Jack with amnesia in a hospital enviroment is just so gorgeously done. Can't wait to read more about Luke. :)

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mobody January 27 2007, 13:34:41 UTC
awesome update, hope you do this a little more often.

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maria47 January 27 2007, 17:05:41 UTC
Why argh??? Squeeeeee is much better:).
An update is better than no update. Right? So don't feel bad for making your readers wait, because it's all worth it.
Your story is so wonderful, Ennis' grief you describe is so painful, it's hard to stand. I hope he will find out soon what really happened to J., lol.

And for being too blunt: A friend of mine and I were on a vacation a few years ago and sitting at the same table with a young man and his little daughter. He told us that his wife died only half a year ago and you could see that this was still very, very hard to take for him. The next evening we shared the same table with him again and my friend made a toast "besser Rotwein als tot sein" which means "better have red wine than being dead".... That was "argh" I can tell you.^_^

Hope you find time to update soon, but I'll wait patiently, (we're used to it, lol)
Maria

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denim_girl2006 January 27 2007, 19:22:20 UTC
Hi! Was so happy to see another chapter, and to have Jack have a tiny glimmer of a memory, even though he didn't exactly know it was a memory! Next chapter they'll be sex....oh dear, this concerns me, I wonder who will be having sex...... don't wait too long to let us know! :)

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bbm_citygirl January 27 2007, 20:29:42 UTC
Sam, I can't tell you how delighted I am to see a new chapter of LOST. I love this story.

I feel for Jack and his frustration over his lack of progress in remembering who he was. That feeling like you are so close to it, as if you are brushing up against something, and feel like it is just a tiny, tiny bit out of reach, and then it is gone is simply maddening. But Lucas' blond hair may turn out to be a trigger for Jack to remember something (or someone), I did catch in Jack's frustration him mouthing off that he has a preference for tall blonds, he just got that part about curvy wrong ;D

Physically, Jack seems to be making some progress. I do have to wonder how it is that he is in this facility (which seems to be first rate and has got to be costing some serious money) when he is a John Doe.

I can't wait so see the details about Ennis' "personal business".

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