Lost, beautiful....ennis4meJanuary 28 2007, 03:54:29 UTC
So, here I am at chapter 18 and can't help by feeling....LOST (:)). Wow...you certainly have pegged our cowboys absolutely perfectly....
Ennis' pain over Jack is so thick, you can feel it through the screen.
and Jack will remember the one person who touched his soul like no other...
I'm very curious as to what is in store for Ennis with the package...
And I'm incredibly curious as to how you are going to work through Jack's returning memory of "curls of blond hair." If he doesn't see himself as loving a man (yet), how is going to deal with these memories???
Like I told you earlier, incredible writing that I'm privileged to read.
Please hurry back when you can! Thanks....Adrianne
I love this story!tonyd2January 28 2007, 05:18:45 UTC
What a great surprise to find this chapter! I've been lurking on the DC threads and knew your busy RL issues had taken over. So I just folded my hands and waited patiently until now -- and what a delightful surprise tonight! I hope you have time to write more soon -- I feel like I receive a little gift with every update. Plus, this is such an interesting story. If it takes a while before the next update comes along, I will just fold my hands and wait patiently again.
I Will Not Give Up On This Story!!bbmiswearJanuary 28 2007, 18:39:58 UTC
I have loved this story from day one...and although waiting for updates can be so hard sometimes I just won't give up on it. I always know another chapter will appear on my friends page eventually! This, to me, is the BBM sequel. The only one I will accept...Jack does not die, he is alive, he and Ennis will find each other again...the perfect sequel in my eyes.
Thank you for another wonderful chapter...I love going back and forth and just crawling in their heads...feeling what they are feeling as it leads up to them finding each other. My only concern is "there's sex in the next update"...but how? It can't be Jack and Ennis...not at this point anyway. Oh please not Ennis and anyone else. Maybe it's a memory...a memory of Jack and Ennis...I'll cross my fingers as you cross two cowboys!!
Waiting (somewhat patiently) for the next chapter!!
Just came across 'Lost' at Wranglers and have read it in one gulp- couldn't leave it alone, it's so good. As a reader of many of these stories, I must say this is right up there with the very best of them. Now that I'm all caught up, can't wait for the next part. BTW, I agree with another of your male posters that you carry off the male voice really well. All of 'em! Thanks for all your time, effort and TALENT.
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Ennis' pain over Jack is so thick, you can feel it through the screen.
and Jack will remember the one person who touched his soul like no other...
I'm very curious as to what is in store for Ennis with the package...
And I'm incredibly curious as to how you are going to work through Jack's returning memory of "curls of blond hair." If he doesn't see himself as loving a man (yet), how is going to deal with these memories???
Like I told you earlier, incredible writing that I'm privileged to read.
Please hurry back when you can! Thanks....Adrianne
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I love Lost!
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Thank you for another wonderful chapter...I love going back and forth and just crawling in their heads...feeling what they are feeling as it leads up to them finding each other. My only concern is "there's sex in the next update"...but how? It can't be Jack and Ennis...not at this point anyway. Oh please not Ennis and anyone else. Maybe it's a memory...a memory of Jack and Ennis...I'll cross my fingers as you cross two cowboys!!
Waiting (somewhat patiently) for the next chapter!!
Lisa/BBMISwear
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The Ennis parts of this story rip my heart out. I can only imagine how many more tears I'm going to shed when he learns the truth.
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