Comments | ozmissage: Lost Drabble: He Was Blind, but Now He Can See (Locke)

ozmissage

Lost Drabble: He Was Blind, but Now He Can See (Locke)

Oct 04, 2009 19:13

Title: He Was Blind, but Now He Can See
Rating: PG
Spoilers/Warnings: Up to “Cabin Fever”.
Summary: John Locke made a choice.
A/N: Written for ( Read more... )

fic: locke, lost_in_108, fic:lost

Comments 9

valhalla37 October 5 2009, 14:18:28 UTC

WOW! Such powerful imagery and such a great sense of language in this -- love the parallels between John giving up on science and him giving up on faith, and how he finds his way back to believing. Fantastic!

ozmissage October 5 2009, 18:22:02 UTC

Thank you so much! I never thought I would write a Locke fic (even a short one) but I actually really enjoyed writing him.

missy_useless October 5 2009, 15:11:52 UTC

This is completely in-character and perfect. I loved this. John is such a tragic character.

ozmissage October 5 2009, 18:23:13 UTC

Thank you so much! And I know John, even if he does frustrate me sometimes, always breaks my heart.

tellshannon815 October 5 2009, 22:11:26 UTC

Very in character for Locke!

ozmissage October 6 2009, 03:09:12 UTC

Thank you! :)

angela_weber October 6 2009, 02:45:53 UTC

You know, as much as I hate John (I know! I really am mean sometimes.), this was truly excellent. I will never master the art of the drabble, and I am seriously jealous of the way you use it to capture the essence of his character so succinctly here. Amazing.

ozmissage October 6 2009, 03:12:40 UTC

Thank you so much!

Heh. I have hated John on occasion myself, but somehow he always wins me back in the end.

I have such a hard time writing drabbles. I'm wordy by nature, so giving myself a limit is like torture sometimes. ;)

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ozmissage November 5 2009, 16:10:51 UTC

Thank you! :)