Lost Fic: the dying of the light (Jack)

[ozmissage]

Title: the dying of the light
Character: Jack
Rating: PG-13 (character death)
Disclaimer: Not mine.
Summary: There’s no time to wonder if it was worth it, no time to wonder if this is a good death.
A/N: Written for lost_in_108 challenge #73 “light”.

Comments

[crickets]

Aw jack. I really liked this. Sad.

[ozmissage]

Thank you! :)

[zelda_zee]

Beautiful.

[ozmissage]

Thank you so much! :)

[pann_cake]

This is so sad. :(( But it rings so true to Jack, and I like the little glimpses he has of the sideways world before he dies. And Vincent! *cries*

[ozmissage]

Aww, thank you! :)

[hintofawhisper]

Oh, beautiful. Jack's death scene will never cease to move me and you wrote this so well. It's very moving. This part in particular brought a lump to my throat:

They’re all there; the ones he loved, the ones he hated, the ones he’s dying for, they stand with him---just synapses flickering, he realizes. Life flashing before his eyes. It’s a nice dream.

And "he lets go" is a great way to end it, especially for Jack and how much those words mean when it comes to him.

Great job. :)

[ozmissage]

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked it. :)

[irishunicorn03]

I saw this prompt and my thoughts immediately went to Jack and I was hoping someone would write about him. His death never fails to bring me to tears and this is a wonderful and beautiful look into his last moments.

[ozmissage]

Thank you so much! :)