Generation Kill fic: drowning but not scared of the water

Mar 22, 2012 21:48

drowning but not scared of the water [Generation Kill, Brad/Nate, NC-17, 1,359 words, a 4_a_star commission for mlyn. A huge thank you to kahtyasofia for betaing. amberlynne safe! Also on AO3 here.]

He wants to lose control and show it, give it to Brad as a gift )

fiction: generation kill, fandom: generation kill, fiction

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accol March 22 2012, 22:12:06 UTC
Oh hai there. Yum!

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oxoniensis March 22 2012, 22:34:12 UTC
Thank you!

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milusia March 22 2012, 22:38:05 UTC
I somehow managed to mix the rating with the word count and thought it has 17k, I so wish it did!

(ok, back to reading)

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oxoniensis March 22 2012, 22:40:35 UTC
Ah, sorry, no! 1,000 words of porn is about my limit!

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milusia March 23 2012, 01:16:00 UTC
I guess it's just my subconsciousness is trying to tell me that I need a proper long GK fic to read :)

edit: Did I just read you mention a regency fic? Looking forward to it sooooo much :)

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oxoniensis March 25 2012, 21:46:39 UTC
There are some great long GK fics out there.

I did mention a Regency fic yes, though it's just a little thing like this, so sadly nothing to get excited about. I do have a long fic on the go, 26,000 words and counting, but that'll be a while yet!

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true_masquerade March 22 2012, 23:28:43 UTC
Mmmm... I love it ♥

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oxoniensis March 22 2012, 23:33:54 UTC
Thank you! :-)

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kahtyasofia March 22 2012, 23:37:20 UTC
Very nice changes. Especially the 'climax'. Yeah, good call there.

Thank you for the honor of being your beta! It was a pleasure!

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oxoniensis March 23 2012, 00:06:24 UTC
I'm glad you like the climax bit. I thought for a few seconds about what you said, and then that all sort of wrote itself!

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kahtyasofia March 23 2012, 02:14:38 UTC
Yay! Always glad to be of help!

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raidtheskies March 22 2012, 23:40:37 UTC
Mmmm, boys.

I love Brad's unsubtle dissent in refusing to kiss Nate back. And they're both so serious, but hot at the same time.

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oxoniensis March 23 2012, 00:08:05 UTC
And they're both so serious, but hot at the same time.

Ooh, I'm really glad it felt like that, because, without really planning it, I think that's how I saw them. Playful when they want to be, but right at this moment, just incredibly serious about fucking and being fucked!

Thank you!

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