Generation Kill fic: drowning but not scared of the water

[oxoniensis]

drowning but not scared of the water [Generation Kill, Brad/Nate, NC-17, 1,359 words, a 4_a_star commission for mlyn. A huge thank you to kahtyasofia for betaing. amberlynne safe! Also on AO3 here.]

Comments

[aeroport_art]

n'awww, lovely. I especially enjoyed the part about how Nate doesn't joke during sex--so romantic.

[oxoniensis]

Hahaha, that's me - I try to write porn and write romance instead! *g*

[bgaleb]

This is hot and beautiful!

[oxoniensis]

Yay, thank you!

[janes_thomas]

i do like the way brad always thinks ahead. i mean can he plan a mission or what!?

[oxoniensis]

Oh, Brad is SNEAKY!!!!

[puckling]

Excuse me while I take a moment to think about Brad wearing a butt plug. UNF UNF UNF.

[kahtyasofia]

IKR! My brain sizzled when I got to that part during the beta!

[oxoniensis]

<333

[oxoniensis]

Haha, I must confess, I threw that in purely to try to make it more porny, but it did nothing for me! *g*

[alethialia]

I'm gonna be a big dork here and gush about Brad being sneaky in the water. No bubbles! Taking Nate's bait all stealth-like!

I do love it when Brad shows his recon badass side. Especially when in pursuit of smokin' hot porn.

Awesome.

[oxoniensis]

Brad was hiding under the pier, just waiting for Nate to offer himself up as bait!