Generation Kill fic: The Music Thief

May 05, 2010 22:01

Thanks to everyone who gave me writing prompts to take on holiday. I utterly failed, though.1 *sadface*

I have written this, though, which I'm posting because nicolasechs wanted Nate singing - thanks for reading it over, babe. It's more Regency AU (previous snippet here), and more Brit English.2

The Music Thief [Generation Kill, Ella, Lord Fick/Mr. ( Read more... )

fiction: generation kill, fandom: generation kill, fiction

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hypertwink May 5 2010, 21:14:28 UTC
I had to read 'trip' again and then reading this...suddenly, I was as sad as Ella for Lord Fick and Mr. Colbert.

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oxoniensis May 5 2010, 21:40:33 UTC
Yeah, sorry, it was supposed to be fluff, and just wasn't as fluffy as it should have been. :-(

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laura_iskra May 5 2010, 22:04:14 UTC
I almost expected a splash on my keyboard reading this.. ella it's right, it's romantic and sad, and if I could listen to the music I would wake up to a damp pillow too..

love her love for the music and for what it's beautiful in it, and love how we revisit their love through her eyes.. but SNIFF!!!

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oxoniensis May 5 2010, 22:41:00 UTC
I've just realised that what I need to do to fix the angst is write Ray the stable boy perving on Brad and Nate getting all steamy in the stables! *g*

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pjvilar May 5 2010, 22:44:45 UTC
OH MY GOD YES YOU DO.

*ahem* sorry. . .

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oxoniensis May 5 2010, 22:50:49 UTC
I daren't promise (I used to be able to just through out comment fic as easy as could be - seem to have completely lost that ability) but I shall try!

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nicolasechs May 5 2010, 22:36:24 UTC
Footnote 1: ME TOO. Let's look at it again, shall we? YES.

Footnote 2: I love pornless angst! Well, not as much as I love angst followed by amazing, life-affirming, soulmate-finding porn, but almost! Oooh, speaking of angst, I'm almost picturing this as a Maurice scenario, where Nate gets married to Lady Helena, and Brad ends up with Ray-as-Scudder, the stableboy. It would be sad but true, I think.

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oxoniensis May 5 2010, 22:45:59 UTC
ME TOO. Let's look at it again, shall we? YES.

Argh, mustn't look now. I've had three seriously late nights in a row, and look and feel like a zombie!

I'm almost picturing this as a Maurice scenario, where Nate gets married to Lady Helena, and Brad ends up with Ray-as-Scudder, the stableboy. It would be sad but true, I think.

Nooooooooooooooooooooo!!! I loved Maurice, but the ending always made me sad, and I just couldn't write Brad/Ray, even if my life depended on it!

I want to write a stupid, mushy, running into each other's arms first kiss scene. God, when my ideas are so trashy, no wonder I can't write!

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pjvilar May 5 2010, 22:39:34 UTC
This is so incredibly beautiful and romantic. Seeing it through Ella's eyes, and how so many different excitements about life are sparked in her by them, is fascinating. So rich and gorgeous. I hope to see more in the future. Thank you.

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oxoniensis May 5 2010, 22:47:49 UTC
Thank you SO much - I was incredibly nervous about posting this, so I'm really pleased you enjoyed it, and particularly happy you enjoyed seeing Ella's point of view - she's been fun to write.

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aeroport_art May 5 2010, 22:46:35 UTC
Unf, the AAAAAAAAAAAAAANGST. Make them get together, Signe ;_;

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oxoniensis May 5 2010, 22:49:27 UTC
I'm trying! Stupid Nate's being all honourable and 'I must do my duty'. And Brad's all 'you wouldn't be the man I love if you didn't.' Pfft.

(There's more Western AU!!!! I have a tab open, and am very excited!)

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aeroport_art May 5 2010, 23:00:50 UTC
i'm chuffed you're following western!AU XD

awwww honourable!Nate. I am totally eyeing the little snippet where you mention Nate being engaged...the jealous!Brad potential is phenomenal o_o want want want

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oxoniensis May 5 2010, 23:10:20 UTC
I'm loving your Western AU!!

Aha, now I have this image of Brad being all frosty-polite to Lady Helena, and utterly hating her!

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