Title: Semper Fidelis Fideli Amato
Fandom: Generation Kill
Characters: Brad/Nate
Rating: NC-17
Word count: 2,355 words
Disclaimer: Based on the fictionalized characters in the HBO miniseries, and not intended as any reflection on the real people bearing these names.
Notes: Thanks to
shoshannagold for the super beta. Written for the
Get Some Porn Skirmish,
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Brad's hands are trembling, like this is something he's been waiting too long for to be careful or to control. He's almost clumsy.
It's not like Brad to be clumsy - Nate's seen Brad under fire and never once seen him fumble or make a mistake - and the import of it hits Nate in the gut, a heat and longing and tenderness that catches him off guard.
And the next bit:
He wants to watch. He wants to watch Brad's face as he fucks him, wants to catch every unguarded expression that Brad can't hide. He wants Brad to see him, is willing to let everything show, everything he's thinking and feeling.
The importance of facial expressions that you can't hide in the heat of passion, that's another kink.
This had such a quiet, intense air about it. Just beautiful.
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OMG, me too! So I'm really pleased this worked for you on that level. And that Brad's hint of nervousness, almost hidden, worked.
This had such a quiet, intense air about it. Just beautiful.
*beams*
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That ending was perfect. I have a huge smile on my face now. :D
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