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Porn Battle VII (The Seven Deadly Sins) - entry post 2

Jan 29, 2009 23:43

We're just four days into the Battle, and I don't think one post will big enough for all the pornlets, so I'm opening a second one. All new pornlets to go here, please.

( copy of the battle rules )

challenge: porn battle, challenge

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Marked, due South, Fraser/Kowalski, bruise lamardeuse February 1 2009, 20:56:16 UTC

Ben rarely spent time studying himself in the mirror, but this morning was an exception.

He catalogued them one by one: here, on the left side of his neck, was the suction mark where Ray's mouth had first drawn part of Ben into himself. Ben's fingertips traced the outline of it, touched it carefully, as though he expected it to burn.

Next he found two curved lines just behind the ridge of his right shoulder, left by Ray's teeth as he'd pushed his way into Ben's body. Ray had been so careful, so gentle, that Ben had let a groan of frustration escape. He wanted to be taken, opened, fucked, but Ray had been concerned about hurting him. When Ben had tightened around him and bucked up to meet him, Ray had cried out and finally, finally thrust deeply, and he'd bitten down on Ben's skin as he began to move ( ... )

Re: Marked, due South, Fraser/Kowalski, bruise miscellanny February 1 2009, 21:42:42 UTC

...NOM

Re: Marked, due South, Fraser/Kowalski, bruise lamardeuse February 2 2009, 01:53:00 UTC

\o/

Re: Marked, due South, Fraser/Kowalski, bruise iadorespike February 1 2009, 21:44:05 UTC

I love that Fraser is so pleased by the marks, even as Ray is so upset. I'm certainly glad that Fraser is able to get Ray to see things his way. ;) This is very nicely, mmmmmmm, done. The heat between these two is amazing to watch.

Thanks!

Re: Marked, due South, Fraser/Kowalski, bruise lamardeuse February 2 2009, 01:53:34 UTC

Thank you! It's been a long time since I wrote these boys, so I'm glad you liked it. :)

Re: Marked, due South, Fraser/Kowalski, bruise meresy February 1 2009, 22:30:34 UTC

I will second the "NOM" above because... NOM.

:D

Re: Marked, due South, Fraser/Kowalski, bruise lamardeuse February 2 2009, 01:53:49 UTC

Hee! Thank you! :)

Re: Marked, due South, Fraser/Kowalski, bruise bibliokat February 1 2009, 23:30:28 UTC

YES, THANK YOU.

Re: Marked, due South, Fraser/Kowalski, bruise lamardeuse February 2 2009, 01:54:05 UTC

Yay, thanks! :)

Re: Marked, due South, Fraser/Kowalski, bruise innocentsmith February 2 2009, 02:25:54 UTC

YOW. Hey, uh... *composes self*

This...this is nice! Good job there.

Re: Marked, due South, Fraser/Kowalski, bruise lamardeuse February 2 2009, 10:23:00 UTC

Hee! Thank you! :)

Re: Marked, due South, Fraser/Kowalski, bruise akite February 2 2009, 02:34:15 UTC

Guh.

Re: Marked, due South, Fraser/Kowalski, bruise lamardeuse February 2 2009, 10:23:21 UTC

Re: Marked, due South, Fraser/Kowalski, bruise luzula February 2 2009, 12:10:51 UTC

Mmmm, yes. Yummy!

Re: Marked, due South, Fraser/Kowalski, bruise lamardeuse February 2 2009, 17:58:25 UTC

Thank you! :)

Re: Marked, due South, Fraser/Kowalski, bruise justabi February 5 2009, 09:43:59 UTC

Oh my yessssss.

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