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Porn Battle VII (The Seven Deadly Sins) - entry post 2

Jan 29, 2009 23:43

We're just four days into the Battle, and I don't think one post will big enough for all the pornlets, so I'm opening a second one. All new pornlets to go here, please.

( copy of the battle rules )

challenge: porn battle, challenge

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It’s Been a Long, Long Time, As Time Goes By, Lionel/Jean, long time anguis_1 January 31 2009, 05:26:22 UTC

“It’s been a long time, Lionel!”

“I may be a bit slower starting up, but I doubt I’ve forgotten how.” Lionel glowered indignantly and attempted another foray in her direction.

Jean squeaked and scooted dangerously close to the edge of the bed. “You’re tired! You’ve had a very long day, and, and you must be exhausted.”

“The length of a day is as boring and dependable as I am; today was just as long as yesterday was and just as long as tomorrow will be, provided the earth doesn’t fall out of its orbit.” He leered theatrically. “And I’m feeling considerably less tired than I did on the way up the stairs.”

Her anxiety had reached fever pitch, and she cast about for any excuse that seemed vaguely plausible. “What if Judith pops in to wish us good night?”

“Wish us good night? It’s a bit of a jaunt from Woking just to pop her head ‘round the door and chirp, ‘Good night, Mum! Good night, Lionel!’” He added more gently. “We have her blessing, you know.”

Jean shot upright, horrified. “What?”

“She said, and these are her words ( ... )

Re: It’s Been a Long, Long Time, As Time Goes By, Lionel/Jean, long time sidlj January 31 2009, 05:49:48 UTC

Oh, you've captured the two of them beautifully! Such a nice surprise to find this as I was scrolling along. :-)

Re: It’s Been a Long, Long Time, As Time Goes By, Lionel/Jean, long time anguis_1 January 31 2009, 06:11:15 UTC

Thank you! Lionel and Jean have such a lovely dynamic between them that I couldn't resist.

Re: It’s Been a Long, Long Time, As Time Goes By, Lionel/Jean, long time sparklebutch January 31 2009, 10:29:40 UTC

I love it. I love realistic, grown-up-people sex. I love people who are people and not plastic, and there's precious little of it around. Thank you for writing it.

Re: It’s Been a Long, Long Time, As Time Goes By, Lionel/Jean, long time anguis_1 January 31 2009, 15:24:41 UTC

Thank you! There is indeed a dearth of realistic, non-plastic people being shown as sexual or (to really push the envelop) desirable (which has been, in large part, my raison d'etre for reading and writing fanfic in the last several years).

Re: It’s Been a Long, Long Time, As Time Goes By, Lionel/Jean, long time sparklebutch February 3 2009, 16:17:48 UTC

realistic, non-plastic people being shown as sexual

...Or being shown at all. *grump*

Re: It’s Been a Long, Long Time, As Time Goes By, Lionel/Jean, long time purplefluffycat May 28 2009, 00:20:20 UTC

Oh, this is wonderfully done! I've never seen fanfic for this series before (is there more?!), and I adore the way you've shown Lionel and Jean together here :-)

PurpleFluffyCat x

Re: It’s Been a Long, Long Time, As Time Goes By, Lionel/Jean, long time anguis_1 May 28 2009, 20:35:59 UTC

Thank you!
There are a few 'As Time Goes By' fics at fanfiction.com under TV Show>British Comedy (http://www.fanfiction.net/tv/British_Comedy/10/0/1/1/0/0/0/0/0/1/), but you have to search them out, and a few at http://community.livejournal.com/atgb_fans/

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