Porn Battle VII (The Seven Deadly Sins) - entry post 2

Jan 29, 2009 23:43

We're just four days into the Battle, and I don't think one post will big enough for all the pornlets, so I'm opening a second one. All new pornlets to go here, please.

copy of the battle rules )

challenge: porn battle, challenge

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It’s Been a Long, Long Time, As Time Goes By, Lionel/Jean, long time anguis_1 January 31 2009, 05:26:22 UTC
“It’s been a long time, Lionel!”

“I may be a bit slower starting up, but I doubt I’ve forgotten how.” Lionel glowered indignantly and attempted another foray in her direction.

Jean squeaked and scooted dangerously close to the edge of the bed. “You’re tired! You’ve had a very long day, and, and you must be exhausted.”

“The length of a day is as boring and dependable as I am; today was just as long as yesterday was and just as long as tomorrow will be, provided the earth doesn’t fall out of its orbit.” He leered theatrically. “And I’m feeling considerably less tired than I did on the way up the stairs.”

Her anxiety had reached fever pitch, and she cast about for any excuse that seemed vaguely plausible. “What if Judith pops in to wish us good night?”

“Wish us good night? It’s a bit of a jaunt from Woking just to pop her head ‘round the door and chirp, ‘Good night, Mum! Good night, Lionel!’” He added more gently. “We have her blessing, you know.”

Jean shot upright, horrified. “What?”

“She said, and these are her words, mind you, ‘I hope you shag Mum silly while I’m away.’”

“Oh, dear! What’ll we do?”

“Well--” His questing hand was batted away before it reached anywhere more interesting than the seam of her pillow.

“Be serious, Lionel! Oh! I won’t be able to face her tomorrow.” She moaned and buried her face in the duvet.

After a few moments passed, Lionel ventured, “Jean, this isn’t about how long it’s been or me being tired or even having Judy know what you’ve been up to, is it? This is about you feeling old and self-conscious.”

“It’s just that I, I’m not lithe, young Jean anymore, and--”

“And I would be quite disappointed if you were. Because, much as I enjoyed ‘lithe, young Jean’ back then, it’s you I’ve trekked up the stairs for tonight. Besides,” he added wryly, “I don’t think I could keep up with ‘lithe, young Jean’ anymore.” He slid the duvet from her loosened grasp and tossed it to the end of the bed. “You’re old. I’m old. The important thing is that we’re old together--here, now.” He eased a button of her high-necked nightgown loose, and then another and another as he bent in for a kiss.

Keeping her mind occupied with the long-familiar thrust and slide of their mouths, Lionel slipped his hand between the sturdy, sensible fabric and cupped her left breast. It was fuller and heavier than he remembered, and the skin more fragile than supple, but the curve of his finger around her nipple still elicited a shivery sigh that fragmented all further thoughts. Her fingers, as tentative as that first night in Buckinghamshire, threaded through his thinning hair. Just as then, he knew he somehow (improbably, impossibly) was holding the most beautiful woman in the world, but this time he wasn’t going to let her go.

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Re: It’s Been a Long, Long Time, As Time Goes By, Lionel/Jean, long time sidlj January 31 2009, 05:49:48 UTC
Oh, you've captured the two of them beautifully! Such a nice surprise to find this as I was scrolling along. :-)

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Re: It’s Been a Long, Long Time, As Time Goes By, Lionel/Jean, long time anguis_1 January 31 2009, 06:11:15 UTC
Thank you! Lionel and Jean have such a lovely dynamic between them that I couldn't resist.

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Re: It’s Been a Long, Long Time, As Time Goes By, Lionel/Jean, long time sparklebutch January 31 2009, 10:29:40 UTC
I love it. I love realistic, grown-up-people sex. I love people who are people and not plastic, and there's precious little of it around. Thank you for writing it.

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Re: It’s Been a Long, Long Time, As Time Goes By, Lionel/Jean, long time anguis_1 January 31 2009, 15:24:41 UTC
Thank you! There is indeed a dearth of realistic, non-plastic people being shown as sexual or (to really push the envelop) desirable (which has been, in large part, my raison d'etre for reading and writing fanfic in the last several years).

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Re: It’s Been a Long, Long Time, As Time Goes By, Lionel/Jean, long time sparklebutch February 3 2009, 16:17:48 UTC
realistic, non-plastic people being shown as sexual

...Or being shown at all. *grump*

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Re: It’s Been a Long, Long Time, As Time Goes By, Lionel/Jean, long time purplefluffycat May 28 2009, 00:20:20 UTC
Oh, this is wonderfully done! I've never seen fanfic for this series before (is there more?!), and I adore the way you've shown Lionel and Jean together here :-)

PurpleFluffyCat x

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Re: It’s Been a Long, Long Time, As Time Goes By, Lionel/Jean, long time anguis_1 May 28 2009, 20:35:59 UTC
Thank you!
There are a few 'As Time Goes By' fics at fanfiction.com under TV Show>British Comedy (http://www.fanfiction.net/tv/British_Comedy/10/0/1/1/0/0/0/0/0/1/), but you have to search them out, and a few at http://community.livejournal.com/atgb_fans/

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