Porn Battle VI (The Undiscovered Country)

[oxoniensis]

Porn Battle VI (The Undiscovered Country) IS A GOTo join the battle, all you need to do is pick a prompt (any prompt, even if it's your own) and write the porniest bit of fiction you can, or make the hottest manip or painting or vid or song. Make it as kinky or as subtle as you like, but make it hot, melt your readers, create a stampede to all the

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Precious Flower, Firefly, Jayne/Simon, orchid

[sparklebutch]

He'd never seen an orchid before. It was so delicate, and Jayne knew the price tag on it was bigger than the one Serenity would have on it if Mal ever sold out. It had no place in this desert world. Jayne looked away from the glass cage where the flower was to the larger glass that showed him the view, nothin' but dirt and sand going on for ever. They barely had water on this planet, but in here it was all cool breeze and nice drinks that only Simon knew the name of, and these flowers in little fishtanks. Tall building when most people lived under the ground 'cause they couldn't afford bein' cool any other way. Tall, clean building, standing and shining in the middle of dirt. Jayne thought about Simon

Re: Precious Flower, Firefly, Jayne/Simon, orchid

[sparklebutch]

I'm glad that you do :) Thank you.

Re: Precious Flower, Firefly, Jayne/Simon, orchid

[galenlisle]

Hee! Wonderful characterizations! Such a Jayne thing to do.

Re: Precious Flower, Firefly, Jayne/Simon, orchid

[sparklebutch]

Thank you! I like Jayne. Simon would have such a strange influence on him.

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[keerawa]

Mmmm, nicely done. I love the study in contrasts, the tower vs. the desert, Simon as an exotic orchid in Jayne's hands. And the image of Simon's cheek, pink from a slap, made my heart beat a little bit faster.

Re: Precious Flower, Firefly, Jayne/Simon, orchid

[sparklebutch]

Sigh, I miss you.

And I'm glad that while pornless, this did get a pulse quickening quicker. ;)

Thank you :)

Re: Precious Flower, Firefly, Jayne/Simon, orchid

[glitterberrys]

I love the idea of Jayne's inner depths - well, if you'd call 'em that - and how they're perceived by others as simplemindedness.

Re: Precious Flower, Firefly, Jayne/Simon, orchid

[sparklebutch]

They're shallow depths, but they are there.

Thank you :)

Re: Precious Flower, Firefly, Jayne/Simon, orchid

[tears_of_nienna]

Oh wow. I've never loved Jayne quite the way I do just now. Our trained ape has some depth to him, it would seem... *reads again*

Re: Precious Flower, Firefly, Jayne/Simon, orchid

[sparklebutch]

I'm very glad. Not just because you liked the story, but because it made you love Jayne more! :)

Re: Precious Flower, Firefly, Jayne/Simon, orchid

[akamine_chan]

Oh my, this was lovely.

Loved the look on Simon's face when he first slapped him across that lily cheek, and how it turned pink, pink like Simon's mouth when it opened in shock and then Simon's tongue lickin' his lips, and then lickin' other things and how he jumped on Jayne and made him pay back a thousand times.

*fans self*

Oh, my. This says so much without saying much. Wow.

Re: Precious Flower, Firefly, Jayne/Simon, orchid

[sparklebutch]

Wheee, thank you! Glad I provided eco-friendly heat.

Re: Precious Flower, Firefly, Jayne/Simon, orchid

[tessykins]

Aww. Jayne's just a big softie.

Re: Precious Flower, Firefly, Jayne/Simon, orchid

[sparklebutch]

Just a big fluffy puppy :)
Thanks!

Re: Precious Flower, Firefly, Jayne/Simon, orchid

[tessykins]

I need to stop this metaphor before I make a reference to Jayne humping Simon's leg.