Porn Battle VI (The Undiscovered Country)

[oxoniensis]

Porn Battle VI (The Undiscovered Country) IS A GOTo join the battle, all you need to do is pick a prompt (any prompt, even if it's your own) and write the porniest bit of fiction you can, or make the hottest manip or painting or vid or song. Make it as kinky or as subtle as you like, but make it hot, melt your readers, create a stampede to all the

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He Remembered, Stargate SG-1, Jack/Daniel, sand

[writinginct]

He remembered Egypt. Remembered the passion for the work, the drive for knowledge and understanding. He also remembered the arid air, the sun beating down like a hammer and feel of the hot sand beneath him. He especially remembered the sand, and how the incline of the dune would shift and move beneath him as he arched and writhed trying to press himself even further down the throat of any one of a handful of fellow students whose knees were cushioned by that same hot sand. Sometimes it was his knees being cushioned

Re: He Remembered, Stargate SG-1, Jack/Daniel, sand

[sidlj]

Ooh, poetic porn! Very nice! :-)

Re: He Remembered, Stargate SG-1, Jack/Daniel, sand

[writinginct]

It was actually your prompt poll that spawned this - I read J/D and sand and that that did it lol... Glad you enjoyed!

Re: He Remembered, Stargate SG-1, Jack/Daniel, sand

[sidlj]

SWEET!

Re: He Remembered, Stargate SG-1, Jack/Daniel, sand

[writinginct]

We could probably sell tickets to that and pay off the national debt ;) Glad you enjoyed!

Re: He Remembered, Stargate SG-1, Jack/Daniel, sand

[advection]

All those almost-full-circle memory paragraphs spiraling down (up?) to him and Jack in the here and now ... lovely.

Re: He Remembered, Stargate SG-1, Jack/Daniel, sand

[writinginct]

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!

Re: He Remembered, Stargate SG-1, Jack/Daniel, sand

[emgeetrek]

Love the repetitions, the same memories and thoughts seen upside down or backwards or distorted. The circularity. Good job!

Re: He Remembered, Stargate SG-1, Jack/Daniel, sand

[writinginct]

I'm glad you enjoyed it! There are so many interesting little parallels in Daniel's life - it's fun to explore them.

Re: He Remembered, Stargate SG-1, Jack/Daniel, sand

[browngirl]

You made sand sexy as a thousand mixed drinks and an hundred songs never have! *cheers you*

Re: He Remembered, Stargate SG-1, Jack/Daniel, sand

[writinginct]

lol... I'm picturing Daniel taking Jack to Egypt and trying to have his way with Jack in the sand in the moonlight and suddenly Jack starts singing the Pina Colada song bwhahaha ^_^

Glad you enjoyed it!!