Porn Battle VI (The Undiscovered Country)

[oxoniensis]

Porn Battle VI (The Undiscovered Country) IS A GOTo join the battle, all you need to do is pick a prompt (any prompt, even if it's your own) and write the porniest bit of fiction you can, or make the hottest manip or painting or vid or song. Make it as kinky or as subtle as you like, but make it hot, melt your readers, create a stampede to all the

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Clarity, The Dark Knight, Rachel/Harvey/Bruce, chilly

[rubynye]

Rachel leans her forehead against the cool window, staring out at the glittering skyline and red-black sky of a Gotham night. The glass doesn't show her reflection, giving her the disconcerting sense she's leaning on air, reminding her of how empty air felt streaming around her as she fell

Re: Clarity, The Dark Knight, Rachel/Harvey/Bruce, chilly

[remindmeofthe]

Oh, I love this. There's lots of interesting character dynamics tucked into this little fic, a lot of stuff unspoken and not spelled out by either you or the characters. I find this quite believeable. Oh, and also, hot. Great fic. :D

Re: Clarity, The Dark Knight, Rachel/Harvey/Bruce, chilly

[rubynye]

Thank you so much! I saw a lot of complexity between them, and tried to convey a little of it, so I'm really glad that came through.

Re: Clarity, The Dark Knight, Rachel/Harvey/Bruce, chilly

[cidercupcakes]

Oh. Oh, oh, oh. This is lovely and sexy and so, so heartbreaking. I just want to make them all soup and hide them forever.

Re: Clarity, The Dark Knight, Rachel/Harvey/Bruce, chilly

[rubynye]

They could really all use it! I wonder if Alfred at least tried the soup. :)

Re: Clarity, The Dark Knight, Rachel/Harvey/Bruce, chilly

[rekindle956]

It is mostly about the boys for me. Loved see them through Rachel's eyes. Thank you.

Re: Clarity, The Dark Knight, Rachel/Harvey/Bruce, chilly

[rubynye]

You're welcome, and thank you for telling me you like this!

Re: Clarity, The Dark Knight, Rachel/Harvey/Bruce, chilly

[michellek]

This is wonderful.

Re: Clarity, The Dark Knight, Rachel/Harvey/Bruce, chilly

[rubynye]

Thank you!

Re: Clarity, The Dark Knight, Rachel/Harvey/Bruce, chilly

[tigerbright]

Bless you for giving her her own agency, here.

Bruce watching unblinkingly jarred me, a little - made me remember that this was more than just romance, here.

Re: Clarity, The Dark Knight, Rachel/Harvey/Bruce, chilly

[rubynye]

*beam* I love the way you see what I'm getting at. Yeah, one of the things I like fanfic for is resistant readings; Rachel is a person too, or at least should've been in the movie.

I'm really glad that detail was jarring, since it was supposed to be. One of the other commenters says she wants to hide them; I want to hide Rachel and Harvey from BRUCE.

Re: Clarity, The Dark Knight, Rachel/Harvey/Bruce, chilly

[tears_of_nienna]

...I am adopting this into my personal canon. Seriously. It fits so well into the movie, the way the three of them interact--there's more than sex going on here.

Oh, yeah, and it's so very, very hot. :D

Re: Clarity, The Dark Knight, Rachel/Harvey/Bruce, chilly

[rubynye]

I made it into your personal canon! Bwee! Thank you for telling me so!

Re: Clarity, The Dark Knight, Rachel/Harvey/Bruce, chilly

[lomedet]

this is lovely. The currents running between all three of them, and the Rachel's-eye-view of Harvey and Bruce...really, really well done.

Re: Clarity, The Dark Knight, Rachel/Harvey/Bruce, chilly

[rubynye]

*beam* Thank you very much! I'm especially glad you like this one.

Re: Clarity, The Dark Knight, Rachel/Harvey/Bruce, chilly

[jenab]

Very nice. I love the images this invoked.