Porn Battle V (the fifth dimension)

[oxoniensis]

Porn Battle V (the fifth dimension) IS A GOTo join the battle, all you need to do is pick a prompt (any prompt, even if it's your own) and write the porniest bit of fiction you can, or make the hottest manip or painting or vid or song. Make it as kinky or as subtle as you like, but make it hot, melt your readers, create a stampede to all the

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Acceptable behaviour, Friday Night Lights, Tim/Smash, juiced

[black_eyedgirl]

In the morning, they won’t even say they were drunk, because in the morning they won’t say anything at all. But if Riggins is dumb enough to say anything, Smash sure as hell’s gonna say that he was drunk, and Riggins shoved him into the wall and mauled him

Re: Acceptable behaviour, Friday Night Lights, Tim/Smash, juiced

[greenapricot]

This is great. I love your Smash voice.

Re: Acceptable behaviour, Friday Night Lights, Tim/Smash, juiced

[black_eyedgirl]

Thank you, I've never written his POV before, but I just rewatched S1 and I'd forgotten how much I liked him by the end!

Re: Acceptable behaviour, Friday Night Lights, Tim/Smash, juiced

[dirty_diana]

Somebody wrote my prompt! *does dance of joy* I have been jonesing for this pairing and this is great, I like the uncomfortableness of it, how you capture how they're both stupid boys, and I love the observations about Riggs, because YES.

*Lyla cheers on the boy-porn*

Re: Acceptable behaviour, Friday Night Lights, Tim/Smash, juiced

[black_eyedgirl]

:D I'm glad you approve. I love the natural awkwardness of the boys in the show, and I've been rewatching S1 (cursed UK viewing schedules) and wondering if Tim/Smash would be difficult, and there your prompt was!

Re: Acceptable behaviour, Friday Night Lights, Tim/Smash, juiced

[devilc]

Dies laughing.

Oh god, yes, this was hot and I love your eye for detail, and that "A hand two-zero?"

And The Smash's comeback?

ROFLMAO.

As funny as it was HOT.

Re: Acceptable behaviour, Friday Night Lights, Tim/Smash, juiced

[black_eyedgirl]

Aw, thank you, I'm glad you thought it was hot. And funny - I do love their snark!

Re: Acceptable behaviour, Friday Night Lights, Tim/Smash, juiced

[athenejen]

Oh, awesome. Clever and hot and boyish and yes.

Re: Acceptable behaviour, Friday Night Lights, Tim/Smash, juiced

[black_eyedgirl]

Thank you so much for saying "boyish", because I love that about them. And also "clever" which is not a word I thought this was, but I will totally take it anyway!

Re: Acceptable behaviour, Friday Night Lights, Tim/Smash, juiced

[happywriter06]

I can't believe someone wrote this pairing. I haven been jonesing for this pairing since forever. It pays off to just spend time surfing LJ. I love this.

Re: Acceptable behaviour, Friday Night Lights, Tim/Smash, juiced

[black_eyedgirl]

:) Well I'm glad I could help then. Nice thing about PornBattle - there's almost no pairing I won't try at least once. Plus, they're kind of sparky together *g*