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Porn Battle V (the fifth dimension)

Jan 13, 2008 16:44

Porn Battle V (the fifth dimension) IS A GOTo join the battle, all you need to do is pick a prompt (any prompt, even if it's your own) and write the porniest bit of fiction you can, or make the hottest manip or painting or vid or song. Make it as kinky or as subtle as you like, but make it hot, melt your readers, create a stampede to all the ( Read more... )

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Second Time's the Charm, Juno, Juno/Bleeker, headband. austen January 15 2008, 16:48:22 UTC

It's summer, the second time they have sex. Fucking sounds too harsh, and besides, they're past the point of doing this just because they're bored and the only thing on Showtime is a Weeds re-run. And Juno would never ever refer to it as making love. So it's sex, but there's a lot more meaning behind it now ( ... )

Re: Second Time's the Charm, Juno, Juno/Bleeker, headband. smartasschef14 January 15 2008, 21:13:52 UTC

Oh, oh, yay!

You have to post this at junoverse

Re: Second Time's the Charm, Juno, Juno/Bleeker, headband. austen January 16 2008, 00:16:46 UTC

Will do!

Re: Second Time's the Charm, Juno, Juno/Bleeker, headband. oxoniensis January 16 2008, 00:21:22 UTC

That's gorgeous - it feels so perfectly in character for Juno. Love it.

Re: Second Time's the Charm, Juno, Juno/Bleeker, headband. pesha January 16 2008, 06:01:47 UTC

Oh I love this! The voice is sublime and I'm stymied by the descriptive tone. It's erotic realism! Thanks so much for sharing!

Re: Second Time's the Charm, Juno, Juno/Bleeker, headband. aliyaskie January 17 2008, 21:54:18 UTC

Ohhhh, wow, this is lovely. Perfect Juno voice, and I love "double-D damned". And the way that now, it's Juno taking something of Bleeker's. It's sweet without being sappy, and absolutely without losing Juno's edge.

Thank you so much for sharing!!

Re: Second Time's the Charm, Juno, Juno/Bleeker, headband. jesshelga January 19 2008, 16:24:15 UTC

I love that it's sexy and teenagery and Juno and Bleeker all at once. You did a marvelous, believable, (sorry, Juno) adorable job with this.

Re: Second Time's the Charm, Juno, Juno/Bleeker, headband. empressvesica January 22 2008, 23:21:21 UTC

Beautiful voice for this fandom and the kind of ending we all really wanted, I think. Lovely.

Re: Second Time's the Charm, Juno, Juno/Bleeker, headband. innie_darling January 30 2008, 20:34:28 UTC

Gorgeous! This was one of my prompts, and this was just what I wanted to read.

Re: Second Time's the Charm, Juno, Juno/Bleeker, headband. park_hye_in March 29 2008, 05:43:39 UTC

aw, this is great.

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