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Porn Battle V (the fifth dimension)

Jan 13, 2008 16:44

Porn Battle V (the fifth dimension) IS A GOTo join the battle, all you need to do is pick a prompt (any prompt, even if it's your own) and write the porniest bit of fiction you can, or make the hottest manip or painting or vid or song. Make it as kinky or as subtle as you like, but make it hot, melt your readers, create a stampede to all the ( Read more... )

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Honesty; Pirates of the Caribbean; Jack/James/Elizabeth, lies erinya January 14 2008, 08:12:52 UTC

There are many lies James Norrington tells himself: that he never considered Tortuga as a likely place to run across Jack Sparrow, for example. That he decided to sail under Sparrow's command only because he's biding his time until he can see the man hanged, for another. That the fevered, tortuously erotic dreams of kohl-lined dark eyes, of tarry-nailed fingers grasping his hips, of sun-warm, sun-dark skin under his hands, of the puckered texture of the "P" brand traced by his lips and tongue--that these unconscionable dreams are nothing but the delirium of a drink-addled mind, more torment for a sinner. That the dreams of Elizabeth Swann dressed like a midshipman--half-dressed, really, breeches down around her ankles as she kisses the gunner's daughter, long white legs spread and her cunny as red as her coat--are nothing but the same ( ... )

Re: Honesty; Pirates of the Caribbean; Jack/James/Elizabeth, lies taskir January 14 2008, 08:32:20 UTC

I'm not usually one for het, but this is excellent.

Re: Honesty; Pirates of the Caribbean; Jack/James/Elizabeth, lies erinya January 14 2008, 09:29:03 UTC

Yay! Thank you! I have a fondness for this threesome...

Re: Honesty; Pirates of the Caribbean; Jack/James/Elizabeth, lies oh_mcgee January 14 2008, 08:39:05 UTC

GUH SO GOOD. The imagery was just amazing. I felt like I was Norrigton, watching Jack and Elizabeth go at it. Seriously hot stuff. <333

Re: Honesty; Pirates of the Caribbean; Jack/James/Elizabeth, lies erinya January 14 2008, 09:30:17 UTC

Thanks! Glad you liked!

Re: Honesty; Pirates of the Caribbean; Jack/James/Elizabeth, lies vulgarweed January 14 2008, 09:20:01 UTC

Oh MAN this is intense and gripping and raw and just thoroughly luscious. Mmmm, rich details.

Re: Honesty; Pirates of the Caribbean; Jack/James/Elizabeth, lies erinya January 14 2008, 09:32:15 UTC

Thank you! I didn't know James was a secret voyeur, but I think I'd stop to watch those two too. It's just pretty.

Re: Honesty; Pirates of the Caribbean; Jack/James/Elizabeth, lies leyna55 January 14 2008, 11:23:03 UTC

You conjured extremely hot images and I love your use of language.

Re: Honesty; Pirates of the Caribbean; Jack/James/Elizabeth, lies erinya January 14 2008, 22:01:30 UTC

Thank you!

Re: Honesty; Pirates of the Caribbean; Jack/James/Elizabeth, lies penknife January 14 2008, 11:33:17 UTC

Oooh. Delicious pirates. Very, very hot.

Re: Honesty; Pirates of the Caribbean; Jack/James/Elizabeth, lies erinya January 14 2008, 22:02:13 UTC

Thanks!

Glad you liked it, because I'm pretty sure it was you turned me onto this threesome. :-)

Re: Honesty; Pirates of the Caribbean; Jack/James/Elizabeth, lies delurker January 14 2008, 12:41:15 UTC

Nice! And the last line finishes it off well.

Re: Honesty; Pirates of the Caribbean; Jack/James/Elizabeth, lies erinya January 14 2008, 22:02:57 UTC

Thank you!

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Re: Honesty; Pirates of the Caribbean; Jack/James/Elizabeth, lies erinya January 14 2008, 22:03:24 UTC

Aww, thanks!

Re: Honesty; Pirates of the Caribbean; Jack/James/Elizabeth, lies atrata January 14 2008, 16:48:58 UTC

Oh, this is so so good! I think this is my new favorite phrase: hot like hell and sweet like heaven. Awesome.

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