Porn Battle V (the fifth dimension)

[oxoniensis]

Porn Battle V (the fifth dimension) IS A GOTo join the battle, all you need to do is pick a prompt (any prompt, even if it's your own) and write the porniest bit of fiction you can, or make the hottest manip or painting or vid or song. Make it as kinky or as subtle as you like, but make it hot, melt your readers, create a stampede to all the

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Cold Mountain, Alias, Jack/Arvin Sloane, bastard-cold

[kangeiko]

"This is the part where you say we need to conserve body heat," Jack murmured, his face partially hidden by the sleeping bag and Arvin's shoulder. The rough wool of their combined scarves twisted around their necks tickled him and he shifted to get more comfortable

Re: Cold Mountain, Alias, Jack/Arvin Sloane, bastard-cold

[bluerosefairy]

Oh, this is so in-character for them. I can see and hear this perfectly - especially Jack's inner narration (especially the bit about the crash-test dummies) and Sloane's fantastically awesome dialogue ("backseat fucking", "vaunted leaps of imagination").

Brilliant!

Re: Cold Mountain, Alias, Jack/Arvin Sloane, bastard-cold

[kangeiko]

Hee! Glad you enjoyed it, honey!