Porn Battle V (the fifth dimension)

[oxoniensis]

Porn Battle V (the fifth dimension) IS A GOTo join the battle, all you need to do is pick a prompt (any prompt, even if it's your own) and write the porniest bit of fiction you can, or make the hottest manip or painting or vid or song. Make it as kinky or as subtle as you like, but make it hot, melt your readers, create a stampede to all the

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Bleed, Fairy Tales(traditional), Snow White/Wicked Queen, bleed

[redcandle17]

Soon after Father died the Queen sent away the whipping girl. Snow White would have to bear her own punishments from now, she said. Snow White was not concerned. She was a good girl and her whipping girl had only had cause to suffer once in her life. She could not understand why the servants all seemed so sad for her, but she soon found out

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[wisdomeagle]

*has no words, gasping for air*

This was my prompt. Thank you. Lots.

Re: Bleed, Fairy Tales(traditional), Snow White/Wicked Queen, bleed

[redcandle17]

Thank you for giving me an excuse a reason to write this. *g*

Re: Bleed, Fairy Tales(traditional), Snow White/Wicked Queen, bleed

[ladydey]

Oh my poor poor childhood - the perversion!!!

Very very nice, seriously dirty wrong, but lovely!

Re: Bleed, Fairy Tales(traditional), Snow White/Wicked Queen, bleed

[redcandle17]

Thanks. :)

Re: Bleed, Fairy Tales(traditional), Snow White/Wicked Queen, bleed

[noelia_g]

Oooh. I don't know if I'm more disturbed or delighted. Probably both, which is the best way. Lovely. Thank you.

Re: Bleed, Fairy Tales(traditional), Snow White/Wicked Queen, bleed

[redcandle17]

Thank you.

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[kaizoku]

*fans self* Hot and creepy! The blurring of jealousy and desire in this is powerful. I think this may color my idea of the fairy tale from now on.

Re: Bleed, Fairy Tales(traditional), Snow White/Wicked Queen, bleed

[redcandle17]

Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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[redcandle17]

Wicked good; the last two lines, just, so...perfect.

Re: Bleed, Fairy Tales(traditional), Snow White/Wicked Queen, bleed

[thady]

This, this is awesome. Seriously hot!

Re: Bleed, Fairy Tales(traditional), Snow White/Wicked Queen, bleed

[redcandle17]

Thanks!

Re: Bleed, Fairy Tales(traditional), Snow White/Wicked Queen, bleed

[rubynye]

That was hot and wrong and gorgeous. *applauds you*

Re: Bleed, Fairy Tales(traditional), Snow White/Wicked Queen, bleed

[redcandle17]

Thank you. :)

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[order_of_chaos]

Ohhh. I like this version!

Re: Bleed, Fairy Tales(traditional), Snow White/Wicked Queen, bleed

[redcandle17]

Glad you like it. :)