Leave a comment

let me sail, let me crash upon your shore (Stargate Atlantis, John/Rodney, heat) siriaeve April 9 2007, 22:59:38 UTC
They're seven days out from Lynthon City, but the captain tells John it'll be another seven days still before they reach the capital; it's the half-way point of the journey, and the sky is like nothing John's ever seen--a deep and monochrome blue that flares brightly overhead through the breaks in the jungle canopy. During the day, he likes to lie on his back on the deck, right up at the prow, and watch it, look for the glimpses that appear through the breaks in the trees, trying to read rhythm and pattern in the way the blue appears and disappears, in the play of light and shadow ( ... )

Reply

Re: let me sail, let me crash upon your shore (Stargate Atlantis, John/Rodney, heat) oxoniensis April 9 2007, 23:12:36 UTC
This is gorgeous - a slow, hazy feel to it - and absolutely fascinating too.

Reply

Re: let me sail, let me crash upon your shore (Stargate Atlantis, John/Rodney, heat) siriaeve April 9 2007, 23:18:25 UTC
Thank you so much :)

Reply

Re: let me sail, let me crash upon your shore (Stargate Atlantis, John/Rodney, heat) dogeared April 10 2007, 01:10:26 UTC
Ohhhhh there's just so much here, what's explicit and what's implied, and I love love them holding hands, and pressing together as if Rodney's cold and John's all blessed heat, and Rodney's longer hair, and all the parts of river and sky and ship. SO lovely! ♥!

Reply

Re: let me sail, let me crash upon your shore (Stargate Atlantis, John/Rodney, heat) siriaeve April 10 2007, 08:49:44 UTC
*beams* Thank you so much, sweetie ♥

Reply

Re: let me sail, let me crash upon your shore (Stargate Atlantis, John/Rodney, heat) sheafrotherdon April 10 2007, 03:19:27 UTC
Oooof, how I love this - the lazy rythym of the words pushing past like water, Rodney's drowsiness, his trust, his affection, John's solidity, and the fragments of a large story we'll never no. SO. LOVELY.

Reply

Re: let me sail, let me crash upon your shore (Stargate Atlantis, John/Rodney, heat) siriaeve April 10 2007, 08:56:38 UTC
*beams and smishes you*

Reply

Re: let me sail, let me crash upon your shore (Stargate Atlantis, John/Rodney, heat) thegrrrl2002 April 11 2007, 02:02:57 UTC
Oh, that's so lovely and fascinating. Such a beautiful moment at the end, too--quiet and at peace and together.

Reply

Re: let me sail, let me crash upon your shore (Stargate Atlantis, John/Rodney, heat) siriaeve April 11 2007, 18:49:43 UTC
:"> Thank you so much!

Reply

Re: let me sail, let me crash upon your shore (Stargate Atlantis, John/Rodney, heat) terribilita April 11 2007, 21:02:28 UTC
This is so beautiful and just. Lush. So much so that you almost forget that in the background something's wrong and Atlantis is gone. Thanks, this was lovely.

Reply

Re: let me sail, let me crash upon your shore (Stargate Atlantis, John/Rodney, heat) siriaeve April 11 2007, 21:10:22 UTC
Atlantis is not gone! It's just been, er, misplaced? *lies badly* Thank you so much, I'm really glad you enjoyed it :)

Reply

Re: let me sail, let me crash upon your shore (Stargate Atlantis, John/Rodney, heat) trixxanna August 9 2008, 23:50:00 UTC
Deep rich and stunningly gripping, all beauty and true substance.

Reply

Re: let me sail, let me crash upon your shore (Stargate Atlantis, John/Rodney, heat) siriaeve August 10 2008, 06:45:12 UTC
Thank you so much! You're very kind.

Reply


Leave a comment

Up