IT'S POETRY TIME AGAIN! 8D

Dec 04, 2006 16:37

Bones, a poem about owls

I swear my poems used to be pretty cheerful )

owls, poetry

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xenylamine December 4 2006, 16:46:00 UTC
That's brilliant, despite being terribly morbid. I love it. ♥

Interesting rhyme scheme, too...

Beautiful. Mem'd.

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ormery December 4 2006, 18:18:16 UTC
Thank you! *happy flattered squiggle*

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frostious December 4 2006, 16:48:40 UTC
Commented on this at DA, but just for the record: LOVEIT. ♥ So much it's not even funny. You should write a wonderfully morbid little children's book - I'd so buy it and read it to all children I encounter. ♥

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xenylamine December 4 2006, 17:33:21 UTC
Like Edward Gorey's Gashlycrumb Tinies, right? That would be perfect. XD; I'd buy it, too.

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ormery December 4 2006, 18:14:04 UTC
EEE EDWARD GOREY. ♥♥♥

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ormery December 4 2006, 18:13:21 UTC
Mwee, I'm flattered you like this so much!

And to be honest I would rather like to - then I could illustrate it too 8D' Maybe if I ever accumulate enough daft little poems to fill a book I'll wave them hopefully at OUP.

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ellrohan December 4 2006, 19:05:04 UTC
Uhm, it might be better to just leave 'pastes' as singluar, it'll still rhyme...

I LOVE IT!!!11!237569billion It's really kinda gruesome, but I like the little one liners at the end of each stanza ^_____^

"They want to eat your eyes" = best line

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ormery December 5 2006, 01:01:23 UTC
Oh, I know it'll still rhyme, but I was thinking SEPARATE pastes. They're very meticulous owls 8D

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jiah December 4 2006, 20:48:36 UTC
Your poetry = awesome.
I would like the pigs and owls to be my friends.

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lil_birdie December 4 2006, 21:46:15 UTC
Oh, I hate you and your amazing talent. D:

You should publish a book. I would buy it. (But only if it had apretty cover. D:)

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