[poem] Forever. Not. Yours.

[outori]

I had feared that the recent issues might have laid the entireness of my muses on ice. Well, maybe not all of them.

Forever. Not. Yours.半世紀前逢いましょう   安い   エンディング     刺して

Comments

[outori]

Why, thank you... I don't think it's as good as some of my poems are, but well, it tells of something, and it does so in its own way, so that's fine...

Depends on what you define as 'it', I guess.

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[unsraws_bitch]

aaawwwwww ...
so beautiful - made me swallow - but definitely absolutely beautiful

[outori]

Thank you. ♥

[unsraws_bitch]

You're welcome!

ARIGATO to you that you let me have this insights!

Poesie

[yuri_desu]

I loved the imagery (I seem to connect with butterflies for some reason).

I felt I could feel all the images as if they were rushing past me contained in shattered pieces of glass. I could smell ash and feel wind.

Very vivid, and beautiful

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Re: Poesie

[outori]

Mmmhmm, butterflies seem to be special in so many ways. They're frail strength seems to be only/mostly visible for females or Jrockers, as those are the ones writing about them the most, it seems. *laughs*

When I read it again some time after I've finished it, it seemed as if they were many shards of different moments and aspects ... yet all of them connected. I love the smell of ash... Well, depends on what is burning...

Thank you darling.