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hellusbellus January 8 2012, 18:49:49 UTC
Adorable. The kissing and schmex was all very hawt, and I loved that the first time was awkward. It felt realistic without losing that bit of romance that makes the, 'awwww,' sound. Lovely.

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ourspacesongs January 8 2012, 19:38:05 UTC
haha, I'm glad you liked the kissing and awkward sex. I haven't written a whole lot of nc-17 stuff so I always get a little nervous, but I'm glad it worked for you :)

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bradlinemrys January 8 2012, 22:23:49 UTC
that was absolutly amazing!!! great job!!

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ourspacesongs January 8 2012, 22:34:22 UTC
thanks so much ♥ Glad you liked it!

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cordeliadelayne January 8 2012, 23:59:35 UTC
Aw, that was great! I loved all the misunderstandings.

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ourspacesongs January 9 2012, 00:45:19 UTC
Glad you liked it :) Thanks for reading!

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warsandtrek January 9 2012, 05:50:02 UTC
Absolutely wonderful. Romantic and hot and so sincere. I love the awkward first time sex, it made it realistic and yet gorgeous. It felt pretty in character too which is always nice. :)

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ourspacesongs January 9 2012, 16:51:42 UTC
awww thanks! It makes me so happy that you thought it was in character :)

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beckella January 9 2012, 06:03:46 UTC
Loved it!

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ourspacesongs January 9 2012, 16:51:58 UTC
Thanks for reading bb! ♥

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