lol i know he seems plain stupid but i have no idea if he even realize that jaejoong thinks he's probably just doing this for the sex or for him :D though he probably won't know until jaejoong tells him that himself D:
well, he should see the obvious! i doubt YunHo's blind! hate when characters do the wrong things! but, no one can force them do the other way. at least, that's what I think
JJ needs love, true... and YUNHO NEEDS TO USE HIS BRAIN! teacher? meeh
lol i'll have to agree that you can't force the characters to change unless you're influncing the writer to change their minds >:D which i know i want to get it straight out already too! ;_______;
LOL!!~ yunho doesn't deserve to be a teacher xD well it's not like he was made for the job anyway :) i'll probably make an interlude afterwards about yunho! >:D
awe.. i hope u find the way soon. haha... this makes it sound u are lost. *sigh* but yeah.. I hope you do find the way out and write! ^^ well off to bed now. night night.
haha i am sort of lost but i think i have a bit of an idea now but i'm not sure what to write with you :( gawd i don't even know what kind of theme to write! i just know i want it to be something romantic and not alot of drama and dislike :/
luulz. i don't know if its just me but this whole chapter was just painfully awkward. i think its because of jaejoong, he's all bleeding in immobile on yunho's desk and yunho is inwardly panicking and i'm like: 'what's he doing? omg.' i'm eagerly waiting to see what happens next, hopefully jaejoong doesn't still think yunho was using him and yunho can stop being such a spazz.
oh no it's not just you, everyone thought it was awkward and even i think it's totally awkward but that's because i had like ten minutes to write this out before my privacy got invaded again D': but yes, yunho should've felt something more for jaejoong but in the end it's just his stupid mind because for some gawddamn reason he is BLIND *__* i can tell you, this will have to eventually go up because i can't stand this either lol
you poor thing. i would literally never get anything done if i had to worry about always being disturbed. and yes i'm seriously wondering how their talk is going to play out in the next chapter--i keep thinking its going to some weird one-sided conversation where yunho tries to explain him-self to a dead eyed jaejoong.
lol i think no one would be able to get anything done period if their privacy doesn't last even an hour ;___; i think i should have done this a long time ago and change the direction of my screen being pointed so no one can barge in the back of me and see my things lol (slow brain) oh my, i think the next one is going to be a bit surprising and delay some of the important things but nonetheless a bit more eventful :) well, i think it would lead up to the near end but i'm somehow unsatisfied by that turn if if do :/ i guess we'll have to see^^
ugh. it's so heartbreaking. what jae feared happened. yunho has an irressponsible side when he wants to fulfill his needs. i'm disappointed in him. :( he should feel really, REALLY guilty.
i hope jae's okay after all this. it's so angsty!
your spur of the moment drabbles are all good. i like how you process it like that, but if you want to write chaptered then write chaptered! how it's just a spur and then it goes out of hand nad it surprises you and the reader. it's like the characters are running the show not the writer (no offense).
if there was a side for yunho's story, it would be too much to explain ;-; considering, it'a all mostly in jaejoong's POV and all :)
LOL i'm terrible with chapters OTL if you read my story "beyond the stars" you could pretty much tell i'm horrible with them D':
i write base on the spur of the moment because drabbles are like freewriting to me :) instead of writing like a diary/thoughts, i portray it as yunjae instead :) ironically i'm always imagining about something whenever i'm not preoccupied and that's what i use as my source of inspireation :D but nowadays, it no longer works the same and i have to think ourside of the box :(
anyway, my point, these characters are what run in my head(obviously) and it reminds me of how writers/artists take care of their characters by trying to balance them out on spinning plates (with the characters on top) it's just finding the right balance and mine are totally unbalanced lol
also no offense taken! criticism is always welcome :)
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WTH YUNHO???
Talk to JJ! Tell him he's not a toy!
Oh I can imagine the angst going on in JJ's mind right now >.<
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gawd!~ i know! jaejoong needs love! <3
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i doubt YunHo's blind!
hate when characters do the wrong things! but, no one can force them do the other way. at least, that's what I think
JJ needs love, true...
and YUNHO NEEDS TO USE HIS BRAIN!
teacher? meeh
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LOL!!~ yunho doesn't deserve to be a teacher xD well it's not like he was made for the job anyway :) i'll probably make an interlude afterwards about yunho! >:D
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but yeah... at least yunho knows what he is doin and took care of it.
^^ I wonder how is the next one will be.
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this makes it sound u are lost.
*sigh* but yeah.. I hope you do find the way out and write! ^^
well off to bed now. night night.
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i hope jae's okay after all this. it's so angsty!
your spur of the moment drabbles are all good. i like how you process it like that, but if you want to write chaptered then write chaptered! how it's just a spur and then it goes out of hand nad it surprises you and the reader. it's like the characters are running the show not the writer (no offense).
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LOL i'm terrible with chapters OTL if you read my story "beyond the stars" you could pretty much tell i'm horrible with them D':
i write base on the spur of the moment because drabbles are like freewriting to me :) instead of writing like a diary/thoughts, i portray it as yunjae instead :) ironically i'm always imagining about something whenever i'm not preoccupied and that's what i use as my source of inspireation :D but nowadays, it no longer works the same and i have to think ourside of the box :(
anyway, my point, these characters are what run in my head(obviously) and it reminds me of how writers/artists take care of their characters by trying to balance them out on spinning plates (with the characters on top) it's just finding the right balance and mine are totally unbalanced lol
also no offense taken! criticism is always welcome :)
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