Comments | osco_blue_fairy: Of Silence and Thievery (13/??)

osco_blue_fairy

Of Silence and Thievery (13/??)

Jan 05, 2011 17:56

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It was quiet now outside the inn, the dark of night fading away as the dawn began her slow approach. Yao was alone and watching the stars in the sky wink down when Kiku found him, his deceivingly youthful face bright and beautiful in the fading moonlight. Kiku felt a small tremor of anger stir in him at the sight but he pushed it aside ( Read more... )

silence and thievery, usuk, writing

Comments 38

prestidigital January 6 2011, 01:27:15 UTC

Yay! Update at laSt and a sequel to boot, things are really heating up now huh?
Don't worry about what you've done with your characters, they're believable and charming, that's plenty ;)

osco_blue_fairy January 6 2011, 01:47:41 UTC

You are speedy gonzales, m'dear! Thanks as always, you always give me nice fuzzies!

And thanks for the support...I think I just needed to get that out of my system, haha! I didn't get many comments...but I got a few and I just needed to vent. <3

prestidigital January 6 2011, 02:08:27 UTC

lol I was online, I'm doing this friending thing over at UsUk and I saw you pop up in my friend updates :)
Your story is adorable, don't worry about that ;)

osco_blue_fairy January 6 2011, 03:53:13 UTC

*glee*

<3

hotbabysitter January 6 2011, 01:30:51 UTC

I fell like I should draw for you soon. Or something. Haven't I done this before? Oh well, I'm better now.

/cryptic stream of consciousness comment

osco_blue_fairy January 6 2011, 01:48:48 UTC

You should. *stares* You totally should draw because I LOVE LOVE LOVE what you did before! Speaking of which, I need to add it to the fanart post for this story...

<3

hotbabysitter January 6 2011, 22:06:31 UTC

*doodles in the paintchat a little*

osco_blue_fairy January 7 2011, 00:43:53 UTC

*glee*

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phox99 January 6 2011, 02:19:57 UTC

I take my hat off to you! This is a great chapter and I want to know what happens next and what hand Yao has in all this cause I get the feeling it more than seems.

osco_blue_fairy January 6 2011, 03:54:33 UTC

Thank you! Happy you enjoyed!

Ah yes, Yao...well, I'm hoping most will be surprised when his whole role in this world gets revealed XD

<333

sppandaaa January 6 2011, 03:08:09 UTC

Another lovely chapter.
Ah, I love China so much~ But I'm sure you already knew that And America and England were like super adorable~ <3

osco_blue_fairy January 6 2011, 03:56:57 UTC

You are too good to me *blushes*

You know, I really find Yao interesting and I like to show his interaction when I can.

AND THANK EFFING GOD ABOUT THE USUK!!! Seriously...it took my DAYS...DAYS to write their fight scene and to get it right. Ugh...I'm just happy it's over, I've been building up to it for like 5 chapters. I should make a mental note to myself that when a similar problem erupts between them later to be prepared for a headache T_T

starfoxx322 January 6 2011, 03:45:41 UTC

Yay, update! I'm absolutely loving this story so far. The more fast-paced and unsure dynamic between Alfred and Arthur is interesting; most people generally don't generally write it, so it's cool to read when it pops up. Your characters are all awesome. I've definitely found a soft spot for Sadiq lately, probably because he's such a badass. XD

Also totally freaking out about the sequel, in a happy way of course.

osco_blue_fairy January 6 2011, 03:59:53 UTC

:DDDD

I'm happy you like the pace! It was really only a few comments...but I wanted to give an explanation nonetheless. Sadiq is such a BAMF...you'll be seeing mroe of him later...notice how the characters that are harder for me to write (ie Poland and Germany) are making their exit for the time being XD. I'm so sneaky.

Yeah, I came to the decision after this chapter...the story is literally morphing to huge proportions in my head. Though when I say sequel...it's probably more appropriate to say continuation ^_~.

<3