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beederiffic June 2 2011, 13:58:22 UTC
DSJHJADSHJDAS

"Your scrotum is so soft, so smooth. Did you find the lump while shaving? Or did you only do it for me? Did you want your balls to be all pretty for your doctor?"

You know how writers have people making undefined strangled noises of arousal? Totally made one IRL reading that line.

HOLY CRAP DO YOU DELIVER THE PORN OR WHAT? And the manip! THE MANIP IS GENIUS. I mean, it's all just so, and I'm all, and, GOODNESS ME, HOW I ENJOYED THAT.

Perfect and hot, awesome fucking, a fine, physically-affecting read. Sweet and funny, too, but detailed enough during each awkward moment to keep all that heat building. Wonderful and one of my very favoritest kinks.

As a thank you for your contribution, please enjoy this handcrafted rolfbot macro:

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orphica June 5 2011, 02:20:36 UTC
Lol Zach's face in that macro. Amazing. I hope he never finds out what we did in the name of his birthday. :D

This is totally my fav kink. I watch hi-larious porn all the time that goes pretty much like this, so I knew I couldn't pass up this prompt when it went unclaimed for a day. I couldn't wait to show people my manip. I was all seal clapping for myself I was so self-amused so I'm glad you liked it too!

(I mean, ZQ in that video game? If that wasn't the intro to medical porn, I don't know what is.)

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leandralocke June 2 2011, 16:40:32 UTC
Live commentary (because otherwise I forget what I wanted to quote and also what I wanted to comment on it *g*)

Despite Zach's worries and the fact that a lump on your balls is srs bsns I still have to giggle at the mention of 'DOCTOR Pine' :D

"Can you open your legs a bit more for me?"
Oh God, Doctor, why did you have to add 'for ME' there? If I was Zach here I'd already have a boner from here to Mars. Gnnnnnggghh.
Well, apparently I don't have to be Zach. Zach's already getting hard on his own. Poor thing.

Dr. Pine cleared his throat, but didn't break eye contact. "So, like I said, everything feels fine, but we may want to check your ejaculatory function. Just to make sure."
OH HOLY SHIT!!!! This is both immensely hot and also absolutely CRACKtastic! LOL I was already wondering how you'd proceed to the sexing from here on, but... there you go. Jesus!

The doctor swallowed. "It does look... concerning."

"It hurts."Well then, why don't you blow a bit and make it all better? :D Oh JFC, this is... I can't even. No no, don't get ( ... )

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orphica June 5 2011, 02:29:28 UTC
Hee! Live commentary is always welcome!! I'm glad you enjoyed it! (And if you want to re-live some bad medical porn, you just let me know because it's totally my fav link and I may or may not have a sizeable collection)

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orphica June 5 2011, 02:41:23 UTC
Thanks hon!!!

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lousy_science June 2 2011, 20:58:24 UTC
This was great - and I continue to love the hell out of your manip - but the fic was so hot.

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orphica June 5 2011, 02:46:24 UTC
Thank you!!

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karmic_fic June 2 2011, 23:00:04 UTC
oh my god OH MY GOD that was entirely, amazingly, supremely awesome and hot and i just *guh*

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orphica June 5 2011, 06:08:01 UTC
Glad you liked it!

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