Live commentary (because otherwise I forget what I wanted to quote and also what I wanted to comment on it *g*)
Despite Zach's worries and the fact that a lump on your balls is srs bsns I still have to giggle at the mention of 'DOCTOR Pine' :D
"Can you open your legs a bit more for me?" Oh God, Doctor, why did you have to add 'for ME' there? If I was Zach here I'd already have a boner from here to Mars. Gnnnnnggghh. Well, apparently I don't have to be Zach. Zach's already getting hard on his own. Poor thing.
Dr. Pine cleared his throat, but didn't break eye contact. "So, like I said, everything feels fine, but we may want to check your ejaculatory function. Just to make sure." OH HOLY SHIT!!!! This is both immensely hot and also absolutely CRACKtastic! LOL I was already wondering how you'd proceed to the sexing from here on, but... there you go. Jesus!
The doctor swallowed. "It does look... concerning."
"It hurts."
Well then, why don't you blow a bit and make it all better? :D Oh JFC, this is... I can't even. No no, don't get me wrong, it's goooood, but I also can't stop laughing :D
"I am, however, concerned about your prostate."
Zach's mouth twitched in a smile. "Oh?"
"Yes, I think it might require further examination."
Oh. My. God!
"I'm checking your prostate function. With a tool better and more sensitive than my fingers."
Zach choked on a laugh at that, and Dr. Pine joined in with a chuckle.
Mwhahahaha. This reminds me of those 70s soft porn flicks they sometimes showed on TV here. Nevermind *g*
Zach sighed at the spark that shot through him when their lips touched. He was going to have to buy a gift basket for the nurse that convinced him to take this appointment.
Awww oh God yes, I was ACHING for them to kiss. Yay!
Wow. Now... can Dr. Pine please be MY doctor? Hrrrrrrr :D
Hee! Live commentary is always welcome!! I'm glad you enjoyed it! (And if you want to re-live some bad medical porn, you just let me know because it's totally my fav link and I may or may not have a sizeable collection)
Despite Zach's worries and the fact that a lump on your balls is srs bsns I still have to giggle at the mention of 'DOCTOR Pine' :D
"Can you open your legs a bit more for me?"
Oh God, Doctor, why did you have to add 'for ME' there? If I was Zach here I'd already have a boner from here to Mars. Gnnnnnggghh.
Well, apparently I don't have to be Zach. Zach's already getting hard on his own. Poor thing.
Dr. Pine cleared his throat, but didn't break eye contact. "So, like I said, everything feels fine, but we may want to check your ejaculatory function. Just to make sure."
OH HOLY SHIT!!!! This is both immensely hot and also absolutely CRACKtastic! LOL I was already wondering how you'd proceed to the sexing from here on, but... there you go. Jesus!
The doctor swallowed. "It does look... concerning."
"It hurts."
Well then, why don't you blow a bit and make it all better? :D Oh JFC, this is... I can't even. No no, don't get me wrong, it's goooood, but I also can't stop laughing :D
"I am, however, concerned about your prostate."
Zach's mouth twitched in a smile. "Oh?"
"Yes, I think it might require further examination."
Oh. My. God!
"I'm checking your prostate function. With a tool better and more sensitive than my fingers."
Zach choked on a laugh at that, and Dr. Pine joined in with a chuckle.
Mwhahahaha. This reminds me of those 70s soft porn flicks they sometimes showed on TV here. Nevermind *g*
Zach sighed at the spark that shot through him when their lips touched. He was going to have to buy a gift basket for the nurse that convinced him to take this appointment.
Awww oh God yes, I was ACHING for them to kiss. Yay!
Wow. Now... can Dr. Pine please be MY doctor? Hrrrrrrr :D
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