[Fanfic] Deep End, Chapter 2

[oroja]

Title: Deep End
Pairings: Ryopi (main), others to come
Genre: au, drama, romance
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I own those guys only in my imagination.
Summary: War altered everything. The world, people, reality. When two young men met each other in a place where they never should be together, something changed. Maybe some people can call it "fate", maybe

Comments

[badbatazz]

wah so much tension. wonder who is who... ahhhhhhhhhhhh clifhanger...........

[oroja]

Oh, come on. If I would end without tension, then it wouldn't be fun xD
Yeah, ok, sorry for that ;)
I shouldn't took any advantage.
Thank for reading sunshine! ♥

[snow_meow]

The last part has got me so excited for the next chapter. I am wonder who are holding guns and aiming at whom. One I know is Ryo at Pi but who is holding the gun at Ryo?

[oroja]

Well, I can just say that's another new character. Definitely not this one, whom Pi called. So... be patient? ;) LoL, ignore me ;)
Thank you so much for reading ♥

[fullhouse_10]

awwww an update *so happy*
seriously I'm so curious about this mysterious man, Who is he??? and what is exactly his relationship with Pi???? ( I know I'm so impatient ^^)
oohh clifhanger *______*
I like this story a lot, the plot is so interesting, it changes from other stories!!
so keep up like this, I'll be sure to follow this fic <3333
thank you for sharing!

[oroja]

I can tell you, but that guy told me that if I betray him, then that gun will be pointed at me, so sorry. I wanna live ;)
You're impatient? Then you have a problem because I'm planning a lot (but then I suck when it goes to planning so maybe you should ignore me...). Anyway you should know more with next chapter ;)
Thanks for reading and for commenting ♥

[fullhouse_10]

XD You better don't tell me anything then, I don't want you to die because of my impatience ;) ...and I'm always willing to wait for a good fic :D

[oroja]

Oh wow, you're so nice. Thank you that you let me live. I'm seriously grateful. With this I can start to think about future, children and evertyhing else ;)
And I will try me best to update soon xD

[droot]

I wanna read the next chapter~!!
I read the two first chapter and now.. now I'm so frustrated because I want to know who the guy is!! And what's gonna happen! And why is Yamapi always fighting to protect Toma, Nami and the others (I think I didn't understand all the explanation so I have to re-read the chapter! xD)
Anyway I love this atmosphere.. fights, guns, darkness, mystery (and.. RyoPi xD)!

[oroja]

Minus of multi-chapters, right? :P
This is scenario in which I want to see Pi on screen. I dream about something like that because I'm sick of his loooove troubles.
And maybe you don't need to read it again, maybe I just forgot to explain why he's acting like that or maybe I wrote it unintelligibly... Sorry, minus of unbeta.
But you should know why he's acting like that. It's all in his image ;)