ENTRY #2 Walk Me Through Memory Lane

[misatsuki]

FIC TITLE: Walk Me Through Memory Lane
RATING: R
SUMMARY: We leave memories in things we own, the places we see and the people we love. Satoshi and Sho are reminded of who they are to each other through these memories.
Warning: Genderswitch!Sho
Word Count: 6201

Comments

[icha_kazeinda]

am I first again??? lol xDDD
I just love everything about Yama!! hahaha.. <3
and they keep their promise to get married at 30.. uwaaa~ it's really touching.. <3 <3 <3

[xrachiebunniex]

Thank you so much for reading <3

[dalinee]

This is so so sweet~

The details of the recollections from both characters alternatively really made so much significance; I can almost imagine everything in my mind. Putting sub-title for each different section made it really easy to read too.

I loved at how their relation started in a rather laid-back way which neither one of them would have expected it to be anymore than it was back then due to the circumstances. It made their interactions very honest and unassuming <3. The progress was slow, but it was understandable how they managed to last so long compared to their respective relationships with others of opposite sex.

Thank you author-san; for sharing such elaborate train of thoughts for this contest, it's really a pleasure to follow through the whole journey.

[xrachiebunniex]

I'm glad it came out to be, what it is.

You knew very well how I felt about this particular piece and to see it come together as a 'comfort' piece - it really brought much peace to me at the end. bahah.

<3 Thank you for reading! <3

[laoracci]

I think it's easy to read and I could feel that their relationship's naturally developed
thank you for this :)

[xrachiebunniex]

thank you for reading <3

[neko_kirin3104]

The calmness of this story is what makes it such a lovely fic to read. Being witness to the gradual progression of the relationship between Satoshi and Shoko, how they just feel right together, even during those times they were not yet together, and how they eventually found their way into each other's arms, it's all pretty reassuring, that by the end of the fic, I feel like I can smile and know they're going to cherish what they have together for the rest of their lives. Yup, that's happily ever after enough for me, too. Thank you for sharing~! <333

[xrachiebunniex]

yeah, it was definitely a pretty simple progression to follow. i meant for it to be light, fluffy and just - nothing our of the ordinary. i likened it to 'real life' :P

*glomps her leah*

^^ thank you so much for reading this and for the support <3

[coolohoh]

aw! that was so sweet! nothing special, just pure love!