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Jan 30, 2009 03:24

Written for the down/under prompt.

Angel/Buffy ( Vampire Groupie )

ats4, rating: r, buffy/spike, ats5, faith/spike, angelus/buffy, spike, btvs2, faith, btvs3, angel, buffy/faith, buffy

Comments 10

rebcake January 30 2009, 06:14:23 UTC

Oh, that last one...gut punch. Angel will never be able to completely understand the dizzying array of Spike's coping mechanisms. But we, the all-powerful viewers and readers, we know. Great stuff.

lokifan March 9 2009, 10:29:02 UTC

For some reason I missed this comment, I'm sorry! It was v flattering to find it though. I love that the last one got you: gut punch is exactly what I was going for. :D

moscow_watcher January 30 2009, 13:17:55 UTC

Great job. I especially loved the last one.

lokifan March 9 2009, 10:29:18 UTC

Thank you! Sorry it took me so long to reply.

cmk418 January 30 2009, 14:05:32 UTC

These are all very nice. I thought your Faith voice in the fifth one was spot on and really enjoyed the Angel/Faith drabble, but my favorite is definitely the first one. I like the subtle hotness of it.

lokifan March 9 2009, 13:35:50 UTC

I thought your Faith voice in the fifth one was spot on

Thanks so much! I love Faith, but I find her voice tough. And I'm SO pleased you liked the first one, cos that was definitely the hardest to write.

zoesmith February 4 2009, 00:14:38 UTC

Great drabbles!! I loved loved loooved the last one the most. They're all lovely but the last is so powerful!
The Angel/Faith one was brilliant too.

Thanks for sharing hun! :)

xx

lokifan March 9 2009, 17:21:03 UTC

Thanks so much!! This was such a lovely comment - and I love that you liked the Angel/Faith, cos I'd never written that pairing before.

Sorry it's taken me so long to reply, I think the comment notifications were on the fritz. :D

leni_ba March 8 2009, 01:06:52 UTC

Wow. All of these are terrific. But I'm in mad love with the last line of your B/S drabble, and the Angel&Spike, too. But that She pushed him. He fell.

*dies* It totally summarizes their whole relationship.

lokifan March 9 2009, 10:30:54 UTC

First, can I just say thank you for commenting - I love comments on older stuff, and for some reason I totally missed the older comments to this post. :D

It totally summarizes their whole relationship.

Gleeee! So what I was going for. I love that you liked the last lines especially, cos to me most of the fun of drabbles in the punchline.