Well, why not?
ONE PIECE FIC-FOR-ALL
Or, free-for-all-fic, or fic free-for-all, whatever phrasing floats your boat, if you will.
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How about having something absolutely awful happening to Luffy, then Zoro has to comfort his captain. Prefer something a little more serious and sad than the usual Op fare.
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There was a silence in which he thought Zoro might've shaken his head, but then the response came before Luffy could tell him that wouldn't work. "Sanji's fine. He said to get you back to the ship."
"So what's happening?" He was confused, and hating how helpless it felt to be unable to see anything. "Tell me!" He managed to get both hands gripped on either side of the boat and to sit up and balance properly. His backside found the seat on the second try.
"I can't see the Thousand Sunny," Zoro mumbled. He had to say it again, louder, because Luffy could ( ... )
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"Exploring. I'm bored, Zoro... and I can't see things with my eyes, so I'm exploring them like this." He ran his hands further along the edge of the boat, and the shift in movement tipped them. He put his hand down to catch his balance, and it landed on something soft and warm. He squeezed it ( ... )
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Great next chapter! Farewell Sanji see you after the pairing goodness! I liked Luffys POV alot here and Zoros mistaken comment about not seeing the boat...can't wait for the next chapter!
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He moved his foot to nudge Luffy awake again. This whole situation was too disconcerting. In a way, he was already used to the feeling of having to look after Luffy, who tended to have no practical sense ninety nine percent of the time and always had to be restrained from bursting off in ten different directions at once... but it was jarring to have to think of Luffy as helpless. In fact, it made him sick to his stomach to think about it too hard ( ... )
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He'd had to do the looking-out for both of them while they'd been in the boat, and it was a long time since he'd had a decent nap...
"...Zoro. Zoro!" From the edge in Luffy's voice, that wasn't the first time, or probably even the fifth, his name had been spoken. He blinked himself fully awake again. "Huh? What, Luffy? Just go to sleep..."
"You were asleep?" Luffy exclaimed. "I thought you got lost again ( ... )
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Ah this update was nice! Pooooor luffy! He is so insecure like this!! Stupid Zoro you kick away a tasty crab in favor of coconuts!?! Come on! Find Luffy some meat and cheer him up!
I really like this story anon! I look forward to your future chps.
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hah. ok, yeah. That was a gaff. But it was a nasty, scrawny, spikey, inedible looking crab with hardly any meat on it at all! Really! Like, a teaspoon's worth of flesh and it'd break your teeth to get it! Probably poisonous, too!
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Do you mind if things maybe get turned around a little so Luffy does some looking after Zoro too?
Also, can there just be sort of slashy tones rather than an outright ZoLu relationship, because while I did have an idea for a little bit of a ZoLu scene, it's turning out really hard to write it in there between all the plot. Maybe I could try to do an extra scene when its finished instead.
I think I should have wrote this as established-relationship from the start really. Trying to fit too much into one story, and it's gonna be long enough as it is.
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Dont worry about doing things the way you like, I'm sure it'll be great no matter what!
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I may have got carried away. But as a bonus I think it actually might have h/c!
Anyway, I hope that within the next 2-3 days I should get the rest of it typed and posted. Something tells me this is one for the overflow post.
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http://op-fanforall.livejournal.com/2332.html?thread=1383196#t1383196
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