The Re-return - HIMYM fic - 2/?

May 21, 2011 23:43



Part Two

“Good morning.”

Robin woke with a start. She turned over in her bed and eyed the man there with confusion.

“Not a morning person?” Matt asked.

Robin blinked. The previous night’s events came back to her.

She said in a groggy voice, “Not particularly. But it would seem you are, hmm?”

He grinned. “A little bit of one, yes. Do you have any ( Read more... )

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digeri95 May 22 2011, 07:59:34 UTC
Although this is my exam week, when I saw the new chapter, I didn't hesitate at all. It was so good again, I really hate Nora/Barney thing now because of Nora's opinion about fate and other things which are related with Barney. And this chapter is just so good for Barney/Robin relationship, especially that growing up matter. When the conversation is serious, there is always word, growing up. And actually it made me feel super proud like Lily. And Lily is the best character in that part, you're writing like the real episode and I really like it ( ... )

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only_thewinds May 22 2011, 08:45:27 UTC
I'll try and sneak a little bit more Ted in there for you in the next chapter. ;) You saying it reads like an episode is quite a compliment, so I really appreciate it. I'm glad you liked it. Good luck on your exams!

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aina_hhrdanem May 22 2011, 09:50:56 UTC
Damn I really wish this resembles what will be Season 7!
Can't wait for more!
And I love that Lily's being really supportive and hey she was handing Robin a martini? Uh-oh! LOL

I was also repulsed by Nora's destiny thing ugh.

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only_thewinds May 22 2011, 21:13:29 UTC
Hah, I just had to slip the martini in there. I have a love for Lily/Robin. :P

I have kind of come to the conclusion that Nora and Robin's crush should get together. And that is now my season 7 head canon.

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klutzy_girl May 22 2011, 13:03:36 UTC
Yes, an update! I loved this chapter. I'm glad Robin tried things out with Matt and then ended it when she realized the relationship wasn't working out.

I also love the talk Barney and Robin had at the end. And LOL at Robin telling Lily how good Barney was in bed when she was drunk and Lily asking if Matt was "Barney good".

Can't wait for next chapter!

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only_thewinds May 22 2011, 21:19:24 UTC
Glad you liked it :)

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idioticonion May 22 2011, 20:21:37 UTC
Like the others, I particularly love Barney and Robin's talk at the end - it's just so perfectly THEM. This story just gets better and better. I'm really enjoying it!

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only_thewinds May 22 2011, 21:20:49 UTC
Oh good, I'm glad you liked the talk at the end. I was afraid for the minute there that they were going to seem too functional/grown up or something. But I thought it made sense in terms of the story. I'm glad it translated well! Thank you. :)

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idioticonion May 22 2011, 21:28:54 UTC
I think they are growing up. I mean, not ALL the time, they can obviously both still be silly and commitmentphobe and everything. But the finale this season gave us every reason to think that they can have sensible conversations. Myself, I believe they always could have, but that Ted didn't report on those!

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only_thewinds May 22 2011, 22:20:12 UTC
I completely agree. I think that they are finally in a place where they can have talks like those when they need to because they honestly have done a lot of maturing. They understand each other well enough to where I think it's always been an ability of theirs, it's just easier for them to have them now that they've grown up a bit. I think they've kind of both realized what's important to them, and it's made communication easier now that they both seem to know what they want.

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snogged May 24 2011, 03:22:36 UTC
*giggles*

I loved that Lily handed Robin a martini. In fact, I loved all of Lily's parts. You did a good job with her character. :)

Also, I loved Barney and Robin's conversation at the end. Growing up can be a good thing.

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only_thewinds May 25 2011, 20:57:34 UTC
Thank you! I just love Robin and Lily's friendship. I had to. haha.

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