The Re-return - HIMYM fic - 2/?

May 21, 2011 23:43



Part Two

“Good morning.”

Robin woke with a start. She turned over in her bed and eyed the man there with confusion.

“Not a morning person?” Matt asked.

Robin blinked. The previous night’s events came back to her.

She said in a groggy voice, “Not particularly. But it would seem you are, hmm?”

He grinned. “A little bit of one, yes. Do you have any ( Read more... )

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digeri95 May 22 2011, 07:59:34 UTC
Although this is my exam week, when I saw the new chapter, I didn't hesitate at all. It was so good again, I really hate Nora/Barney thing now because of Nora's opinion about fate and other things which are related with Barney. And this chapter is just so good for Barney/Robin relationship, especially that growing up matter. When the conversation is serious, there is always word, growing up. And actually it made me feel super proud like Lily. And Lily is the best character in that part, you're writing like the real episode and I really like it. :)

Matt, I think, the next season comes, we will see Matt about in the same situation. Thus, I really like reading about him and Robin, Robin is usual indeed. She is so scared of any relationship and ironically she wants to have a relationship with Barney. Oh, I really miss 5th season, whatever. :) I really connect with the story and this chapter is better than the first one. You are really awesome. I have only one thing to say, you don't mention about Ted so much, of course except Tedding stuff. I really would like to see Ted more. :) Can't wait for new episode/chapter. :)

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only_thewinds May 22 2011, 08:45:27 UTC
I'll try and sneak a little bit more Ted in there for you in the next chapter. ;) You saying it reads like an episode is quite a compliment, so I really appreciate it. I'm glad you liked it. Good luck on your exams!

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