Love Type Thing - How I Met Your Mother fic - 1/1

Mar 31, 2011 00:06

 They were sitting in their usual booth at MacLaren’s when it happened. Robin’s phone rang like any other day - any other phone call. She set down the beer she was clutching and answered her phone. The group continued chatting, unawares. Barney was the first person to notice something was off. He stopped talking to the rest of the group about his ( Read more... )

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idioticonion March 31 2011, 06:53:18 UTC
Wow, that's actually quite sad - bittersweet, you know? Although I do love the little touches of humour you put in.

Robin rolled her eyes. “That’s just Barney. He’s just a bit eccentric. He’s not that bad. Besides he’s wearing a suit now. I don’t think he could keep away from it any longer, actually…”

I really can imagine Barney being twitchy for his suit.

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only_thewinds March 31 2011, 06:58:30 UTC
I'm glad you enjoyed it. It really did end up being pretty sad. I definitely think he would start getting twitchy after a while. I still couldn't believe he lasted so long at Mark's wake. Haha.

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yogurtpo3 March 31 2011, 08:01:57 UTC
Gosh... that was so sad... and Barney and Robin, so unhealthy... but yet, so them! It's exactly something they would do to help each other out!
And I love Barney being all jumpy about his suit, an then letting Robin cry onto it! XD

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only_thewinds March 31 2011, 23:31:54 UTC
I know right. Those two and their dysfunctional ways. I'm glad you thought it was in character. Thanks for reading!

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unzadi March 31 2011, 11:31:04 UTC
I can absolutely see Barney acting like this in such a situation. Loved the twitchiness for his suit and the bittersweet tone of this piece. Letting Robin cry on his suit is a very Barneyish declaration of love.

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only_thewinds March 31 2011, 23:32:32 UTC
Thank you! And I definitely agree about the suit thing.

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lilaschokolade March 31 2011, 14:35:37 UTC
awwwww...Iloved it♥

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only_thewinds March 31 2011, 23:32:44 UTC
Thank you :)

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magpieinthesky April 1 2011, 02:36:24 UTC
I'm actually glad that you ended this on a sort of ambiguous note, and that rang much truer for me in the B/R sense than an ending where they're definitely together and uber happy (not that I'm not a total sap for that too, hehe)... it just worked for me. Good stuff right here!

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only_thewinds April 2 2011, 06:31:24 UTC
Thank you! We;re definitely on the same page. I think that if they were placed in this situation, the ambiguity would be much more them. I think they'd be very dysfunctional in a situation like this and it just wouldn't be them for everything to be tied up in the end with a pretty bow. They've always been a bit of a question mark. I love me a good happy, sappy fic, but I agree that it would not ring true in a situation lie this one. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading :)

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only_thewinds April 2 2011, 06:35:42 UTC
*like

This is what happens when I try to respond at 1:30 in the morning.

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