On Tuesday - Grey's Anatomy Fanfic - Mark/Callie - 1/2

Dec 07, 2009 22:58



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It was a Tuesday when events began to unfold. Mark and Callie were walking down the hospital halls like any other day, work husband and work wife, discussing a mutual patient. The victim had been in a rather nasty car accident and had required the care of both surgeons, plus a few more.

As the walked, just like any other day, ( Read more... )

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poisoned_candyy December 8 2009, 08:58:28 UTC
Sweetie, this is great! xD

I always thought that Hahn could see something between Mark and Callie, especially since she admitted to Callie that she was jealous "because he's seen you naked."

"“Really?” Erica seemed surprised. “Are you seeing leaves?” she smirked casually." Ugh, the whole "leaves" scene.... *rolls eyes* That scene makes me laugh. I know it was supposed to be deep and meaningful, but it did not come across that way at all, IMO.

There Lexie goes, showing her childish ways again. I really really want to like her on the show, but I just can't because she's so childish sometimes!

It's nice to see MC suffering through their breakups together, rather than apart. I'd like to see that on the show, if/when CA and ML break up.

I'm excited for part 2! Great job!

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only_thewinds December 8 2009, 15:17:12 UTC
Haha, thank you! I always thought the leaves scene was a little uncomfortable and trite. I'm really glad she made this realization that she's a lesbian and not just a little gay, but that scene was Awkward City, for real. Hah.

Thanks! Part two should be up by Thursday at the latest.

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blackberry06 December 8 2009, 09:18:56 UTC
Mmm this was lovely, and so very realistic.

I can see both Lexie and Arizona behaving in those ways, and being concerned with the relationship between Mark and Callie. I like that they honestly do really really love and care for their girlfriends, but when it comes right down to it, they need each other more. :)

Great job! and I love that they watch Lost since that's basically one of the best shows ever :)

Can't wait for moreee!

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only_thewinds December 8 2009, 15:11:31 UTC
Hahaha, I often find ways to work Lost in to other things in my life, all sneaky like. Heh. :)

Thanks!

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elise50 December 8 2009, 10:40:02 UTC
aw I really loved this and I can't believe I'm going to type this out, but you made me like Erica Hahn (she, even since back in the day with her Burke feud, has never been on my like scale). I'm looking forward to the second part.

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only_thewinds December 8 2009, 15:12:08 UTC
Hahaha, wow! That is quite a thing to do! Thanks!

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winniemoo December 8 2009, 13:23:10 UTC
“Really?” Erica seemed surprised. “Are you seeing leaves?” she smirked casually.

Okay, what's leaves? Coz I never during the CalliCa era. It was too vomit inducing. Who would've thought Erica freaking Hahn would be the one to finally tell them they belong together, right?

Ugh her name is CALLIE!!! What's so hard about that?

Fuck you Arizona and Lexie. They should just get together. They're both dipshits. Was that harsh?

Awesome fic!!! Update soon!!!

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only_thewinds December 8 2009, 15:15:46 UTC
Hahaha, you crack me up. I can't call it harsh if it's nothing but the truth, can I?

"Seeing leaves" is how Erica described sex with Callie, realizing she was a lesbian. She explained it like when she was a child, she needed glasses, and she always thought trees just had these big green blobs at the ends. Then when she got glasses, she actually saw that they weren't big green blobs, there were beautiful individual leaves, and it was an incredible experience because she could finally see the world the way it was meant to be seen and see everything for what it was, etc. She explained sex with Callie like that because it was so changing and helped her to realize she was gay, and not just a little for Callie.

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winniemoo December 8 2009, 17:42:19 UTC
Oh sweet moses... Who writes shit like that? I realise SaRa is made of hotness, but *vomit*.... I can't even put it in words. Dude..........

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winniemoo December 8 2009, 17:43:42 UTC
BTW I am SOOOOO sorry for making you have to explain that. If reading it made me feel THIS violated, I can only imagine how WRITING it must have made you feel

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aclairec December 8 2009, 15:57:40 UTC
Really looking forward to reading part 2! This is fantastic!

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