I've resigned to the fact that I'm going to be screaming during every chapter over Ben/April. It's inevitable and I hate you for it!!!! God, though. The whole back and forth between them about her missing him throughout this chapter is so great and the pay off was great and "Okay, now go away," she told him, but she had a hint of a smile on her face as she said it. IS GREAT and YOU ARE SO GREAT.
Also the Ben/Leslie angst is beautiful and hurts so good.
This is so good! You have really nailed Andy's voice in particular and I love all of the April/Ben friendship stuff.
This is so heartbreaking, I'm so glad that you made it clear at the beginning that Leslie/Ben were the endgame, otherwise I would be a mess reading this.
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I've resigned to the fact that I'm going to be screaming during every chapter over Ben/April. It's inevitable and I hate you for it!!!! God, though. The whole back and forth between them about her missing him throughout this chapter is so great and the pay off was great and "Okay, now go away," she told him, but she had a hint of a smile on her face as she said it. IS GREAT and YOU ARE SO GREAT.
Also the Ben/Leslie angst is beautiful and hurts so good.
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This is so heartbreaking, I'm so glad that you made it clear at the beginning that Leslie/Ben were the endgame, otherwise I would be a mess reading this.
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