1sentence claim

Apr 28, 2006 00:23

My 1sentence claim - 50 sentences of pure psychoshipping (Yami no Malik x Yami no Bakura). Enjoy, and all feedback is love.

blatant addiction. )

yuugiou: yami no malik/yami no bakura, yuugiou: yami no bakura, fandom: yuugiou, yuugiou: yami no malik, type: slash

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xinda April 29 2006, 04:38:45 UTC
#10 - Drink

Yami no Bakura drinks deeply of temptation, for he thinks that is the only way to quench his thirst for the other.

Niiiice. Sets a mood for something that could be fairly deep, I think.

#11 - Midnight

They're never asleep when midnight rolls around.

That did not send my mind into the gutter Theme __ of psychoshipping. Works so well.

#12 - Temptation

Thiefs steal whatever takes their fancy, and Yami no Bakura is tempted beyond all reason by the shine of the other's skin.

Very nice. Goes right back to a thief knowing a treasure when he sees it and with Yami no Malik all golden-like (among other things) makes it make that much more sense.

#13 - View

The hotel room has a perfect view of Dubai, but Yami no Bakura prefers the way that Yami no Malik looks in chains.

xD Nice. Why wouldn't he? I like this one for 'view'. Rather than it being complete environment, it goes back to focus on one of the two.

#14 - Music

Yami no Malik hums along under his breath to the melody of Yami no Bakura's screams.xD NICE ( ... )

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xinda April 29 2006, 04:39:24 UTC
#21 - Silence

They're only silent when they're listening to the sounds of other people in pain.

*applauds* Something they share in common.

#22 - Journey

There is no end to eternity, but they're walking hand-in-hand.

Love this. Another interpretation that I love. Hell, even all of these could be used in one fic if done correctly, but I continue to adore and love the way psychoshipping can go many ways and so many of these lines show that.

#23 - Fire

"Remember when I made you burn - did you realize I was getting off on how you screamed?"

xD That's perfect.

#24 - Strength

His pretense of strength only amuses Yami no Malik.

Ouch. But, fitting.

#25 - Mask

The closest either of them ever come to masks are the crimson slashes of blood that splashes over their features and stains their lips matching hues of red.

Perfect. So fitting and nice imagery.

#26 - Ice

In iron-nailed boots, they stamp on thin ice until it breaks, then drown together.

Ouch. Kinda makes me think of them going out with a bang and without fear.

# ( ... )

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>.< xinda April 29 2006, 04:39:53 UTC
I had to break it into three times. So sorry ;;

#31 - Sacred

Bending Yami no Bakura over the Pharaoh's sacrophagus and fucking him should feel like sacrilege, not Paradise.

xDD yet, neither would have an issue. Both would be amused beyond reason.

#32 - Farewells

Why say goodbye when the darkness always returns?

Mmmm. Kura's famous lines and oh so perfect.

#33 - World

Yami no Malik wants to destroy the world, but he can wait until Yami no Bakura is sick of ruling it.

Niiiice. xD That's so perfect. So perfect and I could see YnB agreeing to it at one point. Ruling, then destruction.

#34 - Formal

Golden fingers knot the tie tightly around a slender white neck, then grip the ends and pull.

Ha! That sounds so amusing. Whether it should or shouldn't. Though, I go from sex to death to another thought all at once.

#35 - Fever ( ... )

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magnet_dance April 29 2006, 05:44:48 UTC
Cool~ my favorites - 5, 6, 14, 18, 23, 26, 27, 31, 32, 48 & 49.
The others were awesome as well <3

Also, eeee! Dubai! That's where I come from! :DDD

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homgsekrit April 29 2006, 06:02:38 UTC
#04 - Box

Even the wrapping paper on the box that Yami no Bakura hands Yami no Malik is stolen.

That has to be my favourite. >D Mainly because I adore thieves, and that's just laugh out loud hilarious, and so Bakura. >D

I...actually love how this goes from something light-hearted, then gets darker, and darker, yet remains carefree and wild.

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(To use Dani's style of commenting) cruxis May 2 2006, 13:40:02 UTC
#22 - Journey

There is no end to eternity, but they're walking hand-in-hand.

Absolutely pure unadulterated love for that. The best one, I think. It's short, simple and deathly potent.

#28 (Forgotten) & #29 (Dance) get me too. *sucker for the short but good*

#37 - Lies

They don't claim to love each other; why bother with such p(r)etty lies?

Another excellent one. Petty or pretty, depending on the moment. I like this concept a lot.

#40. #48. #49. #50. Coming to the end. Very enjoyable. *nods* ♥

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Re: (To use Dani's style of commenting) fickle_goddess May 9 2006, 01:47:49 UTC
*purrs at you for the feedback* I'm glad you liked reading them and specificied your favs.

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blackstronghold May 12 2006, 17:22:52 UTC
Your icon drives me nuts in all possible ways. @_@ It's so cute~

# 41 is definitely my favorite. ^^

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