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All I Can Say Is You Blow Me Away

Jun 07, 2011 23:50

Title: All I Can Say Is You Blow Me Away
Author: only_because3
Pairings: Faberry, Quinn/Puck friendship
Rating: ... G? Quinn's topless at one point so I guess that'd make it T?
Word Count: 2807
Summary: Her body feels sore and she can only assume it’s because whenever she plays video games with Noah, she’s tense the entire time (she’s much too ( Read more... )

puck, rachel, quinn, i could be verse

Comments 10

sashadiamondz June 8 2011, 14:50:02 UTC

Absolutely loved it <3

t8kmybreathaway June 8 2011, 15:03:30 UTC

This was remarkably cute as hell! Loved it.

mjacton June 8 2011, 16:14:52 UTC

Rachel pushes herself off the bed and pinches Evan’s cheek before poking the side of Quinn’s boob just because she can.--Nice!

As far as I'm concerned, you can write fluff as much as you want.

cate53 June 9 2011, 00:17:30 UTC

Very sweet! Thanks.

sulkygeek June 9 2011, 05:28:27 UTC

This was so sweet-- sincerely. I love family stories, especially when the parents are extremely competent (I work with a lot of families who are "in crisis" as we like to diplomatically state it). My favourite thing about these stories is that even though Rachel/Quinn (and Noah) are obviously great parents, they're still sexy/cute as hell. I'd like to believe that even with six kids, I'm still as attractive/sexy/appealing as ever, but the truth is, I'm kind of stodgy/myopic/anal retentive and prone to uttering things like "CAROLINE, YOU CAN'T BE BATGIRL TO CHURCH? WHAT DO YOU MEAN WHY? BECAUSE...OH, FORGET IT! BE BATGIRL!" and "THOMAS, GET YOUR FOOT OUT OF YOUR BROTHER'S MOUTH, THAT'S GROSS ( ... )

only_because3 June 9 2011, 05:53:46 UTC

DO YOU KNOW HOW MUCH MORE I'D GO TO CHURCH IF PEOPLE DRESSED UP AS SUPERHEROS/VIGILANTES?! Though I'd probably be too distracted to listen to the sermon lol I'm glad you enjoyed this! I really like writing these happy family pieces, even though I really felt with this one that it was kind of pointless since it's just a snapshot... No real plot so to speak.

sulkygeek June 9 2011, 06:02:55 UTC

ha!! Well, four of my children are very close in age. I just gave up on the battle. When people ask me "why are your kids in capes?" I'm like, "well, when the fuck else can they wear a cape in public? They're LITTLE"

Also, this doesn't really need a plot, because the plot is the fact they're a family. the best moments of family life are plotless.I'd hardly call this story "pointless" -- it was really sweet and depicted a moment in a family's life and it'd be a family I'D be proud to be a part of.