Touching The Heavens Above

Jan 14, 2010 23:58

Title: Touching The Heavens Above. (One Shot)
Author: onkeyloves
Pairings: Onew/Key
Ratings: G
Genre: Romance.
Summary: It's still comes back to just loving you and never letting go.

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you just have to love me, thats all. )

rating:pg

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yoshika244 January 14 2010, 19:47:48 UTC
This is my first time comment since I'm not good in english... but I have to... coz ur fic is so great and I need more from you!!!!

P/S: I've got song that the lyric can inspired you to make some good fic...

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onkeyloves January 15 2010, 01:26:56 UTC
hi! I'll keep it simple too then! (:
awww. Thank you so much! it means alot to me for you to drop a comment for me! -hugs- I'll try my best to give you more!♥

p.s: really? I welcome all ideas! (: tell me the song! & I'll try my best and see if I can come out with anything!

Thanks for commenting and reading!

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yoshika244 January 15 2010, 05:05:07 UTC
I just post it here since it really hard to find English lyric for this song.This song is by kinki kids. This song is like 2 person POV... I just state 1st person as A and 2nd person as B ( ... )

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yoshika244 January 15 2010, 05:15:19 UTC
By the way, why I think this lyric is good is becoz both of the singer is a guy... =)

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weerainbow January 14 2010, 21:21:10 UTC
I thought you were going to break my heart...you did a little but then you mended it again. I love the way you wrote the reality of a love that is fought against and pushed around, and how even those struggles are worth it just to be together. The image of the love coupled with such hurt being worth every minute, being worth more than an easy life without it, was beautiful♥

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onkeyloves January 15 2010, 01:24:39 UTC
-huggles- so glad I manage to mend it back! hate to see it broken! ah~! your flattery makes me blush to the core! >,< But thank you so much! I feel really touched (:

I hope this isn't really gonna happen in real life /: I just want them to be happy! =X reality is harsh though so im still hoping!

Thank you for commenting and reading!♥

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sweetkiwihanah January 14 2010, 21:46:10 UTC
OMG this is sad. but i love how everything went their way and onew hold on to key and protected him.
now this is what i call love
PS: i love reading ur fanfics but i never commented cause im a silent reader XD but i just love you and ur fanfic -hugs-

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onkeyloves January 15 2010, 01:21:32 UTC
ah~ another silent reader! (: You all make me so darn happy just seeing your making an effort to comment on my fic! -heart flutters-

uh huh. I guess neither kibum nor Jinki would want each other to go through it alone.<--love♥
I hope they'll stick through any obstacles together!

p.s aigoo~! Thank you so much! I love you just as much too!♥ -huggles tightly back- It was lovely of you to drop by! :D

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sweetkiwihanah January 15 2010, 11:37:28 UTC
next time i'll try not to be a silent reader anymore. kekek :D
PS: keep on writing ur fics r awsome :D -gives u a hug and a cookie-

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sweetkiwihanah January 15 2010, 11:39:15 UTC
opss forgot to log in. my bad
kekekek XD

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earenya_beryl January 15 2010, 00:45:48 UTC
In the real world , we can't pretend this won't be the reaction they might get if any of the really get together, and that emotional pain was very well written here.
You did well with the theme and the characterization,
and man, isn't it angsty.
Anyway, thanks for sharing.

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onkeyloves January 15 2010, 01:18:18 UTC
sighhs. But i hope this is my side of interpretation, I hope the real scenario would be much easier and they wouldn't be treated with harsh reactions if the love is real. I'll probably just hope.

aigoo~Thank you for your compliment! I hope that my writing gets better the more I write. boo to angst, yay to them still being together! /:
Thanks for commenting and reading!♥

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njrv16 January 15 2010, 03:36:32 UTC
OMG this is so painful to read T_T
You have no idea how relieved I was at the ending when Onew stayed with Key.

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onkeyloves January 15 2010, 09:14:59 UTC
its good to see you here again! (:
omo. I didnt want any of you killing me >,< so i made sure I didnt break them up like the other fic! :D I hope they'll last till everyone understands and accept them! ♥

Thank you for commenting and reading!♥

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