Dedicated to...
Within a perfect person such as himself, there would be absolutely no sort of creases nor flaws; or so he had thought.
He guessed he was wrong after all.
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“I don’t think I can stop even if I wanted to,” Ryo mutters softly, exhaling with a small sigh and leaned the side of his head on the seat of the couch that he was occupying. ( Read more... )
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second: u're certainly made of the awesome!!:3 i love it~! i really do. i love how u portrayed Baru's affection toward Ryo. i love cause Ryo seems to be so vulnerable. i love cause u mentioned Uchi (yes, Uchi!! *lol*), and i love the ending. though i'm not really sure if there's an intro to this fic (cause u know how 'often' i read fanfics, hehe.. ). u made me wonder WTH happened to Ryo? the Sexy Osaka Man XDD
oh! and u mentioned Shige and Pi also! nice ^^d
anyways, ur fic is LOVE ^o^ i think u should make some more, and i'll surely read them =} but maybe next time u can post them up without those red/orange sparkly thingy *lol*
the words u used are very.. challenging ^^ (u should be majoring in English Literature or sumthin' =D) u sure have what it takes to be a writer ^^ and that is why i stopped writing years ago XDD
oh my.. i did it again, posting too long comments XDD but long replies/comments are LOVE, yes? no? =3
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*lol* Uchi just suddenly popped out from nowhere. His muse is playing hide-and-see with me. =p Hm...and yeah, I myself have no idea what's really up with Ryo, either. Which is why some parts aren't explained. I guess it just adds to the fun/mystery of it? ^^'
Shige was actually part of the prompt, but Pi as normal, just ninja-ed his way in. XD
Ah, gomen about the HTML stuff. Does it look really bad? I have to learn how to do it properly the next time. ^^'
Eh? Challenging? Gomen ne...it all just sort of came out. like that. ^^' demo arigato for the compliment...though I'm not good enough to major in Eng Lit and I really need to brush up a lot more on my writing skills. ^^'
*lol* long comments are totally fine, especially when they come from you. *huggles* oh, and on a random note, the hard subs for Nodame SP part 1 is out! Watching Chiaki-sempai now. Hehe. ^^
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so i can't ask u to spoil the mystery of what happened to Ryo? XDD i was just going to ask u about it *lol* i thought like he had got himself into something really serious, or he got sick or something :DD oh well, let's not spoil the fun of it :3
noo.. it doesn't look bad really. just the combination of my crappy PC screen + my eyes that's making me a bit difficult to read ur fic *lol* no worries though, i think u did just fine with the HTML thingy ^^
ahaha.. gomen ne... i said challenging cause my English skill isn't good enough to comprehend some of the words >.< i even looked some words up to my dictionary yesterday :DD which was why i said that u have what it takes to be a writer ( ... )
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Gomen gomen about that. ^^'
Ahh~ Gomen and sankyuu ne~ *huggles*
IT WAS GOOD!! Very funny!! Now I can't wait for the next part. XD
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...and sorry you didn't know any of the characters either. It's just that, fanfiction's been the only thing I've been reading lately, so original fiction would be difficult to write these days. D=
OMT YESSSS I really don't mind filling you in. Kitsune might even help a bit if she knows enough. BUT YES NO WORRIES I WILL FILL YOU IN NO PROBLEM AT ALL. Gigantic flying naan, y/y? XD
I'm so glad you could read on without stopping; that mean I at least didn't fail too badly. XD
*LOL* the stiffness in the beginning couldn't be helped; because I myself didn't know what I was going to write in the first place. It was completely direction-less until the muses decided to poke me a bit. XD
I haven't written one since we finished the essay for our UPSR back in standard 6. You do the math. XD
Chibi shall try her best, but gives no guarantees. ILU LIN~~~
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I swear I won't mess around with HTML anymore, or at least until I'm sure that they won't turn out disastrous. *cries*
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Lucky thing your background's black so it worked quite well ^_^
Haha!! Anyways, HTML is there for yea to play with. Otherwise it'd just rot in some nasty corner waiting for the next millenium to pick it up XD Huhu!! No worries. Sparkly away, chibiiiiiii~!!!!!!!
(It was more of the PINK that was err... interesting)
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“Why doesn’t he seem to have a voice that loud when we’re performing live or on tour?” I've just watched MS Live special and...well...ehm. No comment XD
Please keep writing ♥
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Thank you for visiting and commenting and such!! ^^
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