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oni_gil

Fic - Wild

Feb 15, 2011 16:48

*sliding bow-down* Just read this book on Sunday and saw the movie Monday. (Twice. >>) These characters are so slashable it's not even funny.

Title: Wild
Fandom: The Eagle (oftheninth), movieverse
Characters/Pairing: Marcus/Esca
Rating: M/R
Summary: Exploring a relationship in fine, fragmented style.
A/N: I've never written anything like this before. I ( Read more... )

marcus, esca, fic, eagle

Comments 15

sablewick February 15 2011, 23:54:54 UTC

Wow, that was lovely. I was a little confused at first by the switching back and forth. But you did a fabulous job of capturing the tension between them and the rawness of their relationship.

Esca singing!!! *grin* A lovely image.

oni_gil February 16 2011, 01:56:34 UTC

Thank you!

iz_factor February 16 2011, 03:22:14 UTC

hey
this was great. There was such a great imagry throughout I especially liked
No swift conquering offensive tonight. This was preliminary scouting. they're such boys :)

oni_gil February 16 2011, 03:23:57 UTC

Thank you! I was trying to get imagery from my mind onto the page.

That was one of my particular favorites. XD

hopeleslihooked February 16 2011, 05:12:25 UTC

This is beautiful. You have real talent.

oni_gil February 16 2011, 05:14:59 UTC

Aww, thanks! *blush*

kyme February 16 2011, 12:59:13 UTC

...bb. So beautiful. Even though I don't know them. YET.

I MUST GET TO THIS MOVIE. and this book? There's a book?

<3

zed_azrael February 16 2011, 18:04:35 UTC

This is absolutely stunning. I'm so jealous of your ability.

You've captured them so well in their setting: the raw need and the contrast of order and unpredictability, how wild and fascinating Esca is to Marcus. Your descriptions are just lovely -- you've managed to convey so much with so few words.

oni_gil February 16 2011, 18:50:16 UTC

Augh thank you! <333