play

[ex_argh]

Title: play
Author: argh (@ oneuldo)
Rating: R? NC-17?
Length: 2,071 words
Pairing: G.Onew (G.O/Onew)
Summary: A velvety smooth voice is all it takes to lure him in...
Warnings: unbeta-ed!
Dedication: a birthday fic for onewlurver ♥ (originally posted privately back in April)
Notes: um I don't know what I was on when I wrote this? Maybe just high on water? Coz I think

Comments

[lisis_miyu]

OMG this was beautiful! The way you put the lemon was so artistic! You can't fell it like a lemon more like a played of a instrument and in the same way a very good tasted lemon, wonderfull.
By the way, where they were? In a alley or at jinki's or in the bar? It let me a little o.O xD thanks for share

Yay by the way first kekeke

[ex_argh]

haha thanks^^; actually tbh I much prefer lemons like this ._. kind of vague and not really detailed XD (well I think thats how it is from memory) XD

oops sorry I guess it was too vague^^ hahahaa they went to Jinki's house so it was inside his house. XD Sorry I guess I forgot to edit that in ^^;
but thank you for the comment^^; and I'm glad you liked the lemon even if it was kinda vague :c
♥

[scythegyen]

Love the way you used music as your description. Perfect becomes a most imperfect word to describe how much I liked this.

[ex_argh]

^^; yeah I'm not even sure where this came from ._. LOL I was... really hyper at the time.... I can't even blame the full moon XDD but thank you for commenting ^^ and I'm glad you enjoyed it :D
♥

[volatileflame]

why do you always second guess yourself? your writing is amazing and this piece was no exception! this was beautiful, i tell you ~ beautiful!

[ex_argh]

because I always find that when I'm proud of a piece (or I really like it) no one really does (or I get less comments on it). So. XD Plus this is an odd pairing so I expected most people would pass over it XD

but thank you T~T for liking it and thinking it was beautiful ^^; this comment made me feel really happy^^
♥

[volatileflame]

oh, i know exactly what you mean. *sighs* it's disappointing at times, when you really like a piece, and it doesn't seem like anyone else does. however, i try to think positive (and this is a pessimist speaking), and like to think that it was so good, everyone's just speechless XP

seriously, your fics are fantabulous! ♥

[ex_argh]

yeah but now I stopped being like "\:D/ I LOVE THIS FIC AND AM SO PROUD OF IT! everyone else will love it too right? :DDD" hahaha because usually it doesn't get many comments^^;;

lollll I like that theory hahaha XDD

but thank you so much T~T;; your comments make me so happy ♥ *hugs*

[ramen_lover30]

wow... I officially ship this pairing now O__O
this fic is very beautiful, I love every bits of it <3

[ex_argh]

thank you so much ;__; ♥ hahaha awww really? XDD
but thank you for the lovely comments~ ♥

[letsflywannabe]

This was just amaze /awestruck
I wanted to read a GO/Onew so badly after watching OMS and then I stumbled across this!
I'm so very happy ~ ^.^;
This was beautifully written :D
Thank you for a wonderful read ~
<3

[oneu]

sorry for the super slow reply D: but thank you^^ I'm glad you liked it!! :D

Hehe really? A friend asked for this for her birthday :c but the idea of the pairing had never entered my head lol. ^^;;; but it makes me happy to know you enjoyed it too. :D

thank you ;__; and no problem :D ♥