Title: Puzzles
Author: argh (@
oneuldo)
Rating: PG-15
Length: 2,817
Pairing: Onew/Minho
Summary: Jinki loves puzzles, so Minho challenges himself to solve one to try.
Notes: beta-ed, thank you to my wonderful beta! Written for
kpopvalentines challenge! The prompt was "puzzles
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I haven't been reading those depressing Minew fics you were talking about, but this fic is really really cute and nice! (So much that if it were a person I'd pinch its cheek LOL).
I love Jinki's boldness here :P and I started loving this fic the moment he was draped all over Minho (till the end of course :P). And how Minho just lets him stay like that... OMG I think my heart was singing at that moment...
And let me tell you something bb, the prompt "puzzle" totally suits this fic :) Cause, apart from the Rubik's Cube, the fact that Jinki is puzzled by why Minho is solving it it gives this puzzling feeling. So I'm glad you decided to write fluff for this prompt^^
(Although I'd like you to write the cop fic too :P)
Oh, and the whole 'making out' scene at the end (which is just a kiss really but yeah)... FUCKING AMAZING.
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yeah the image of Jinki draped over Minho ;_; blows my mind. Maybe coz its something I can see Minho doing to anyone but Jinki would only do it to someone he cared about a lot. lol.
I guess so ;_; but I wanted to do something else (as you know). But :/ now I feel like I can't write that other idea I had... not now SHINee is coming out with Sherlock :/ fml. Everyone else will be writing detective shinee fics. oh well. :( When don't I write fluff anyway? :/
yeah lol it is just a kiss. haha. anyway thanks for the comment^^
♥
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(cute like Minho & Taemin's teasers? ;DDD)
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especially when Jinki puts his his arms around Minho’s torso ... and lean on Minho's shoulder -////-
(as crazy/insane fans who miss them) .... I wish they could stay like that for awhile
and I don't know if they really do something like this at dorm :P
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all the moment while they are trying to solve that Rubik’s Cube ... may I say ? 'romantic scene'
the best scene for me ... I'm not talking about 'making out' yet :P
I seriously want Jinki to help Minho solve that cube every time ....oh of course it will end with they 'making out' lol
last but not least :P
this is cute and great one ... I will recommend other to read it XD
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Hehe yeah that image blew my mind when I was writing it too^^;;!
But we don't miss them anymore \o/ because they are coming back! *dances* :D
Of course they do something like this in the dorm :D!
Ah really? Actually one of my friends said that scene was too long/boring ;/ so I didnt think it was romantic or good. :(
Hehe yeah^^ i know you dont mean the kissing part ;)! I want them to do it too ofc with the making out part too. XDD
thank you^^;; ♥ you're so sweet~ :) let's hope for Onew's shirtless teaser pic too XD
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