This Broke My Feels

May 17, 2013 02:41

Title: The Lion and the Lamb ( Read more... )

going merry, fiction, nakamaship

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stelra_etnae May 17 2013, 13:53:50 UTC
Not what I expected when I put out the prompt, but hey, it's always nice to be surprised! XD
Very creative, using Sunny and Merry as the main characters. I like the fable style you used, and the presentation of the two are real animals. It was a sweet story. :)
Nice work!

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jadekitty777 May 17 2013, 15:40:23 UTC
Ahh thanks dear ^^ Haha, I just couldn't think of how I could make a good AU in 300 words or less and not make the AU too complicated to understand the concept I was using. I ran ideas through my head for like 4 days too, but nothing was clicking until this xD.

I'm excited to see the other entries; AU style is always great fun.

And I'm glad you liked it 8D!

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printfogey May 17 2013, 18:43:36 UTC
Lovely and heartwarming, and a very original idea! And the tone is very suitable for a fairy tale/fable AU.

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jadekitty777 May 18 2013, 00:37:21 UTC
(I keep forgetting about my Usopp icons! xD for shaaaame). Anyways thank you dearie! I won't lie, when I decided on this idea I read a few Aesop fables to kind of the idea of how they were generally written.

Glad you liked it 8D

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jadekitty777 May 18 2013, 09:06:11 UTC
Aaah why thank you hon! *hands over apology band aids for the broken heart* glad you liked it ^^

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uftaki May 18 2013, 07:13:35 UTC
alsdkfa omg... so sweet and adorable and so different... love the 'fable' style, that you used Sunny + Merry... Just... beautiful! <3

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jadekitty777 May 18 2013, 09:10:24 UTC
Daah! *squirms happily* Thank you very much! Sunny and Merry need more stories about them they are two great! Glad you enjoyed 8D

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