all the revolutionaries i know are awful dancers

[hellodeer]

title: all the revolutionaries i know are awful dancers
pairing: harry/louis
rating: pg-13
summary: louis wants revolution and change and fight and harry falls in love quite quickly.
author's notes: not sure about this but anyway. inspired by and dedicated to felipe, a socialist communist marxist revolutionary who will never, ever read this. also

Comments

[darelose]

a thousand tornadoes being formed, and harry will be damned if he doesn’t stick around for the thunderstorm.
Oh this line was so beautiful. I liked this a whole lot, how you managed to say so much with so few words. You just make it so easy to get a sense of each boy without needing to say a lot and it is so fantastic. And I love weather metaphors.

[hellodeer]

thank you so much, rebeccah! your comment is very very lovely.

i love weather metaphors too. and astronomical metaphors. and physics metaphors. just love metaphors tbh.

[love_wilts]

he takes other people’s pains and makes them his own so maybe that’s why he’s so sad.

that is just a beautiful line & there are so many beautiful lines. this is beautiful i tell you, pure beauty and prose.

[hellodeer]

thank you, elle, you're a darling :3

[theviolonist]

that was really beautiful - i love the premise, louis being who he is and surprisingly (or maybe not) it works very well (also harry studying french is so perfect in my mind).

i really love the pacing, and the way it's light and charged at the same time, tension and release, didn't someone say that once? anyway. i loved everything, really. it was beautiful.

harry gives him a tight smile, because not really, no. this struck me for some reason. i don't think it's the best line, but there's something about it that's so visual and true.

great job.

[hellodeer]

i think tension and release was the title of a larry fic? think it was by say_thanks or intherubble, idk (it's probably by neither)

anyway mathilde, you are flowers and summer rain and pretty clothes and not getting lost when going somewhere for the first time and finding a download link that works for something you really want. thank you thank you thank you!

[theviolonist]

yes yes it was, not by say_thanks though : )

stop i'm here to compliment you darling : ) (though may i add that your - description/wishes are the most beautiful ever? not getting lost when going somewhere for the first time and finding a download link that works for something you really want that makes me smile so much).

and you're welcome : ) you deserve it! keep writing!

[shoreparty]

Whoa you had me at the first line. There's just more urgency when the world of the fic includes these real details and not just whatever beachscape it appears their lives are now. I was kind of imagining a BBC news-ticker beneath everything as I read this? Idk what I'm trying to say. Whatever. Loved it.

And inelastic collision yes! The engineer in me swooned a little :)

[hellodeer]

aaaaaaaaahhhhhhh thank you effy!!!! you also liked this on tumblr, didn't you? thank you again!

haha inelastic collision is gr8 as a metaphor

[k_sewell1d]

oh, this was absolutely stunning. really beautiful prose.

[hellodeer]

thank you, darling!