Comments | oncomingscone: Something Left To Lose

oncomingscone

Something Left To Lose

Jan 15, 2010 23:03

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angst, sex, janto

Comments 26

iamashamed January 16 2010, 08:10:27 UTC

wow, this was really well made! in charachter and believable!

oncomingscone January 16 2010, 18:03:41 UTC

Thanks. I always try to make them the Jack and Ianto we all know and love!

hazelayes January 16 2010, 08:12:01 UTC

MMmmm. That was really something. :) Powerful and raw and very much in character for me. I loved it.

oncomingscone January 16 2010, 18:03:54 UTC

Thank you x

hab318princess January 16 2010, 13:01:25 UTC

That was amazing!

oncomingscone January 16 2010, 18:04:08 UTC

Thank you! Glad you think so. x

twinsarein January 16 2010, 13:49:41 UTC

I have nothing new to add to the comments you've already gotten. I can only reiterate - I found it strongly in character, bittersweet and hot at the same time. This is a relationship I can believe in, and one I can see growing into something better. Beautifully done!

oncomingscone January 16 2010, 18:04:51 UTC

Thanks. I usually avoid cyberwoman stuff because it's so intense, but I figured I turn the intensity into a positive!

branwen_blaidd January 16 2010, 13:55:25 UTC

Awesome!
Characters are perfect. Sex was hot and emotional. I love the bit about Ianto needing some control back.
Beautiful ending!
Well done
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oncomingscone January 16 2010, 18:55:44 UTC

Thank you cariad! xxxx